I found this story to be very well written, and exceptionally beautiful. Now, I never really considered Kouhaku and Kanna being paired, but now I think I may actually even ship them. I loved your idea, and I think you portrayed both the characters very well.

Adrian

What a great story. The characters are in character, with a sort of realistic sensation of the way they live their lives

Absolutely beautiful. I love the imagery and the use of color symbolism. And I love the characters D.

This brought tears to my eyes. I loved the beautiful simplicity of it all. *adds to favs* *adds you to favs as well*

Oh my. That, was, beautiful. Nothing else. Favourites, most definately.

thats so sweet!

Your story has won Second Place for Best Romance (Alternate Pairing) Fiction from the Feudal Association.

Your award can be found here -

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And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here -

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Wow. Just ... wow.

Congratulations, your story has been nominated for "Best Romance Fiction (Alternate Pairing)" at the Feudal Association. Voting will be held through May 1st, 2006 and winners will be notified shortly thereafter. Feel free to join our group and/or help us spread the word about our group!

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it was kinda strange in a good sort a way :)

Your story was very good! I wasn't so sure about the couple but now I kinda think they make a cute twosome! Keep up the great work! ;3

For its creativity, this goes in my favorites.

what a cool story with such an adorable ending!

Sweet. The comparison of Kohaku whose lived twice and Kanna who hasn't lived at all. very good

Wow. Angsty, yet with a content ending. You took a hard idea and made it into something wonderful. Good job.