Wow, this is so good! You're a great author. I have one question though. At the end it says "I cried out in pain every time a shard of stone cut me" but if she's mute how did she cry out in pain?

Wow this is good! write more!

Hey You,
I love the story! I can not wait until you finish it. To let you know this is the kid who sits by you in english class. Sorry if i made you mad about critiszing your story. I was just kidding! LOok i love the story and try to email me back if you can. I will not be at school tommorow so will you try and leave a space for me in your group. Peace Out!

OMG! I LOVE IT!

Hey! I finally found your story and I love it so far!