Nice one-shot. :)

OMG, good fic, in a weird sort of way, but shit, can't split Kei and Kaneda up lol. That's like breaking a rule. The idea was good, you can really work it into a good story. Try.

I really liked some of the ideas in that, like that Kaneda is forgetting despite himself, and the reason that Kei's not around any more. It was a bit short and seemed to tail off rather, but considering it was so short it was quite insightful and interesting.