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| cindy 2007-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abusetotally adorable. i like this ending way better than the other verson where darien calls himself a stud. congrats. you're a wonderful writer. |
| Champion of Justice 2007-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseAwsome story. Really good. |
| cool 2006-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abusei still like this, story it's cute bye. |
| SailorSerenitys 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abuseAhh what a touching one shot!! I definitaly enjoyed it! It was a cute glimps at cute young love! Hopefully you two authors will colaberate again soon! |
| Affinitive 2006-07-22 ch 1, | abuseCute story ^^ |
| xX.mediator. 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseLoL! Serena's so much more...open, brave...and bold? hahaz i've never read a fanfic before where SERENA was the dominant one and took everything in HER way... not that its a bad thing of course... original.. |
| Ishkabod 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseOkay well i must say this just isn't my cup of tea. I must mention the fact that there was no getting around Serena's OOCishness It's the whole plot of the story that forces it out. I thought about it for a bit and figured that maybe if you want you could add a little bit to it. What i'm suggesting is that you do some of serena's POV inbetween the different things she does on that couch like you did when she got to the appartment. THE KEY is to have her trying to remember watching something or having lessons from mina or something along those lines on how to seduce someone you like. Allthough she must interperate it like suduce is to get them to A. Like you or B. ask you out/kiss you or even admit their feelings for you. I have to say it is well written and i don't see how it could get better unless you added more to her side of the story. Thank you for shareing a story i did get some enjoyment from and i'm sure many others enjoyed as well. Thanks once again Ishkabod |
| SteelHeartRose 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseloved it can't wait to read more of your stuff I really like this stuff it's great must read more. |
| TrueDestiny 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseHey! Wow, this is seriously GREAT. AH! I hope that you write ALOT more fanfics, because, you are a fantastic writer! Keep it up! |
| Stars4mel 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseomg this story was so beautiful! but serena is that much younger than Darain they are like 4 years apart isnt he suppose to be a senior in her highschool? |
| Starlit Warrior 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat! I love it! Good luck and God Bless!! |
| dhacky san 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseits cute but I would really appreciate if Serena is not that straight forward hehehehehehehe (female pride) but all in all I really like it |
| Cristal-moon 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseJust perfect...i love it! |
| sailor_serena141 2005-10-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseso cute. loved it |
| Nizidramanii'yt 2005-10-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't know why you consider this story so bad. It's great sweet'n'funny type! Excelent to improve your mood :) |