damn that was long as hell! it was real good tho, great job. hope to see more from you

truth to be told
i didn't read all of these
i just skipped around
but the ones that i did read were okay
though, like i said, you can tell these are your older works

wow, you used to be such a different person
but overall, these weren't so bad

you can tell this is one of your older works
but these are still good

this chpater was awesome! I would love to make a story about this, I've been planning it for a while. This is like exactly what I was thinking about! How do you create/post a story anyway? RSVP ASAP cause I need to write something!

(Ack. I didn't get an email about this update. What in the--?)
Hmm... Not my favorite, but still pretty good. The person getting CPR or whatever is Kohaku, right? Or is it Miroku? Just checking. Good job!
(I also just finished reading that thing you sent me, so... Yeah.)

AWESOME-NESS! My God! These are SO GOOD! The words you use and the way you decribe things with extreme detail and emotions! I haven't read them all, but I am going to and I really like the way that you work with each "theme" and the way that it ties in some how with what you are trying to explain. I admire that way that you make it flow and the simple words explain so much with the way you have it layed out. :D Awesome job! Great work, keep it up. ^-^

I liked how you started it off, but I didn't really like the rhyming part as much. Don't get me wrong, it was still great and probably one of my favorites so far. Keep up the good work!

perhaps, a bit confusing to me, but I didn't think it was your best. Still goof, but not great.

-hands you some soup- You going to be okay, hon?

wow, starnge and morbid, but well written.

Know what's exciting? Having a Queer as Folk-athon all through the night (HOURS AND HOURS AND HOURS) with your two best friends. Hot boys ALL OVER EACH OTHER. ^-^ I dare you to do a google search for Brian Kinney.

He is sex incarnate.

I think you'd like it. It's pretty... uh... racy, so don't watch it with your parents. My friends and I hid in the basement so we could watch it...

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And about the el-jay community: I have absolutely no writing skills whatsoever, but I'll gladly watch the community and comment if it'll be any help.

O.O ...creepy

00... interesting...

amazing! VERY creepy. Loved it.