This is pretty good, Rimera. Really sad on some parts, but good non the less. I usually don't read fics that have this much angst and don't read any fics with horror in it, but this was good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon please.

That was really good! I guess Trunks wont be in the story. He's my favorite character. Is Trunks going to be in the story? cause I really want him to be. He's my favorite. plz post again soon

this is a good story please continue it

hi

this story rocks. xD

sorry, i've been reading this story non-stop, so yeah...i like it though. ^_^

Hey, great story so far Rimera. I always love reading a good A/U. ^_^ Poor Veggie though...eating his own leg *shudders*.

Chibi Vegeta: *watery eyes* And you killed Nappa! Nappa! *bursts into tears*

Roux: ...feh...he was a fool...(Inner Roux: WAH! NAPPA!)

Things got a little gory a few chapters ago, but I can see you've put a huge effort into this. I'm curious to know what the significance behind the name Kress that Raditz mentioned is.

Roux: ...she killed him too...my friend... *growls*

Pay him no heed.. It's really interesting to see just how out of wack things could get in the DBZ universe without Gohan in the mix. Great job so far, and I'll be comin back for more. ;-)
-Da General

Roux: ...*looks around quickly before bursting into tears and singing Evanescence's "My Immortal" for his dead friends*

PS. Love the Evanescence lyrics in the beginning. ^_^ Might I suggest "All That I'm Living For" for a future Gohan chapter? ;-P

Hello, so glad you updated. I just started reading in a hit of DBZ nostalgia. Hope to see you update again soon. Love a bit of Gohan angst XD

This is a excellent chapter update.

can you plz update

This is a excellent story, through it is quite different to what I usually read.

ok i really liked where this story was goin at the beginning but wtf i mean it still cud hav ended up wif gohan defeating cell or him bak on earth.vegetas all evil nd hes eating his arms nd ppl. i jus dunno kinda wierd...

Oh man that sucks that Kess is going to be evil, I was hoping that it was Vegeta that was the planet killer, but any way please update soon, I'v never read a quite like this befor and I love it and it would be a shame if it didn't get finished.

im loving this version, its much more dark. please update soon i would love to know how u carry this on!

Noce touch. I can't wait until Goten runs into Gohan. I wonder if they will ever figure out they're brothers?

-Vlade

you need a love interest for the sadistic Gohan.

I'm sorry and i don't mean to sound dumb or anything, but who exactly is Pel's father? oh gawd, I've lost it. . . .