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Reviews for: Her Final Words
Tragic warrior
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Nice story, though it was a bit too short. Even if Shego killed Ron by accident, I highly doubt she would be allowed into heaven. If you read any of my stories, review and tell me what you think.
CastaS
2006-10-02 . chapter 1
great shot, i enjoyed it, excellent work.
hmm may i should try to find other words to express the same thing, i didn't realize that when i reviewed the other stories by you with almost the same words.
well may in another language like swiss-german or something like that. but doesn't make sense if you don't understand them. or i should try to extend my english vocabulary.
spacedout86
2006-03-01 . chapter 1
:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
Evil sad endings >_
Martin
2005-11-25 . chapter 1
WOW!! I don´t really know what to say about this!!

This one is good and bad! But you can´t always get a happy ending! And this one is a very good one! I think i´m gonna cry soon!

Good Work!! Keep it up
NAster
2005-10-23 . chapter 1
very touching, i liked it. I do kinda wished you showed the circumstanes behind Ron's death. Shego's evil, but i guess that wasn't all that vital to the story...
anyways, good job i look forward to reading more :)
Doug4422
2005-10-13 . chapter 1
WOW !! That was ONE POWERFUL FIC ! And I though I had talent, this one has my only heartbreaker beat all to hell. Way to go . :-)
Robert Teague
2005-10-09 . chapter 1
This is very sad. I would guess that what you've written here relates to you somehow, and I hope it had the intended effect.

I've been coping with depression for over ten years, so know what it's like, but I try not to let it spill over into the stories I write. But that's just me.

Keep writing!
Yuri Sisteble
2005-10-09 . chapter 1
A sweet tearjerker.
Very nice.
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