interesting, great... good

This is absolutely gorgeous, and so in character it makes my heart ache.

You are now my "go-to" author whenever anyone asks for in-character, canon, non-yaoi stories.

After reading Closing Day I couldn't help to wish there were a sequel to it, after they had finally met each other again. And what do I see later if not just that? I'm glad we seem to think alike xD

You did well writing this. Even as they checked on Kaiba Corp, you kept it interesting enough. It also strengthened the highlights of the story, the ones where Seto and Mokuba interact the most as brothers, of course.

Everythings in place, all fits. In character. It's pretty much what you would expect to happen if the canon one had continued, only more emotional - better. Furthermore, you managed to inflict many feelings upon me and constantly I found myself swifting between frowning out of concern or smiling.

Another good job.

This was a good story. And I haven't read a good story in a long time. I liked how very accurate you were; you definately knew your backround and what you were writing about. I don't know I just fancied that. I suppose it's because we all tend to forget some of these small details that can make the whole story real.

It was really cute, I loved it. You portrayed the characters very well, and that I thank you for. Like I said, haven't found a good fanfiction in a very long time, so this was kind of a breath of fresh air.

Overall it was well written, and very well done. Keep on writing, the site needs more writers like you.

-Kari

Adorable. Simply adorable.

Again with the awing. Dude, I really love the way you write the brothers' dynamic.

I think you write Mokuba and Seto the best out of anyone I've ever read. You just do such a consistently great job with the two of them. I especially liked the idea that Mokuba has to think of Seto as being someone else during Death-T and can't deal with an apology because he's not sure it's something he can forgive.

aw, I'm all full of happy fluffy feelings now :P

So incredibly touching- I love the accurate portrayal of their relationship. It's not often one encounters a proper Kaiba -brothers story properly written, which keeps them in character and is enjoyable to read! Well done! I loved this!

The characterisation in this was amazing I can't help but "aw" at the reunion scene in the manga, and this fic has the same sort of effect. I'm such a sucker for sibling-fluff..

What a great story, always makes me wana grab a kleenex.

Just...*yes*.

Outstanding character piece, and so *very* adorable. -

... How much can I LOVE an author I only just found? Seriously. I'm falling for your writing faster than a brick wall. *Loves this story, and all the rest she's already reviewed*

That was so good

I love the way you show how special these ordinary moments are. I also really liked the idea that Mokuba needs to think of the Death-T version as someone else - as someone besides his Nisama - and he doesn't want his brother to apologize because then he would have to admit that this was something that was part of his brother all along.

And I liked the brief flashback to Gozaburo with it's implication of how Kaiba's own concern for Mokuba leads to his not being able to show it.