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terrorofthehighway
2009-07-02 . chapter 1
Nice. :)
Cold-Lover
2007-12-08 . chapter 1
hehe tezuka,
sweet fic, great job x3
iannetine
2007-10-22 . chapter 1
Amazing! You gave Tezuka a surprise-in-the-locker-room too!
I always knew Tezuka’s too polite to ruin everything!
The way you write it is so picturesque…Tezuka’s really himself in here…though I’ve always imagined he cherished the emotional side of it more…but hey, who am I to complain?
I really like it a lot…cheers for doing an amazing job on the details…

Thought it’s just me…I can’t help but squeal for the TeFu part in the end…
speadee
2007-09-05 . chapter 1
Ha, ha! Funny! Good job with the tension at the beginning and then the excitement at the end!
i-see-faeries
2007-01-07 . chapter 1
Haha! This is so funny! I was eating lunch while reading this (not smart) and nearly choked. It's okay though because they story is so good. I LOVE Fuji and his cactus. ^^
CelicaChick
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
Sugoi ne! Don't have to worry about your little ficlets! I think I've read all of the PoT Fuji/Tezuka ones now! Kawaii!
Cheers!
nightmare rose
2006-06-11 . chapter 1
aw...i find this fic...sweet and awesomely funny haha lol
Imaginator
2006-02-28 . chapter 1
Yay chaos!! ^__^ Another beautifully written one-shot, squashed with madness, fun, and crack. XD *applauds*

Still looking forward to more!
carzla
2005-11-19 . chapter 1
Oh Gods! That was hilarious! All the chaos started by Momoshiro in the locker room! XD My stomach is still aching from laughing so much! ^^

It's great! Whee! *continues laughing*
moribayashi
2005-11-19 . chapter 1
hey, this was fun to read. =D i think buchou should feel grateful that his team cared so much for him, though i can perfectly understand the dread of having birthdays in school days... people throwing rotten eggs and stuff at you until you're soaked in it and even though you bathed 3-4x already the foul smell wouldn't go away... but i don't think someone would actually dare to do that to tezuka, not if they want to live through junior high save and sound. ^^;;

keep up the good work.
jj
2005-10-24 . chapter 1
yeah. they were all behaving quite themselves, tho we seldom see what tezuka is thinking off. anyway, i will really be scared if my birthday is sth like that! mayb u can try with other ppl's bdays too!
Fightingdreamer5
2005-10-14 . chapter 1
Cute, the ending was a little confusing 0.o, but I loved it
driftingwanderer
2005-10-09 . chapter 1
CUTE! great job.
Tora Macaw
2005-10-08 . chapter 1
I loved it! The slapstick comedy was well written and full of good timing. Your discriptions were great, I could almost see the chaos unfolding as an anime! Of course, the best bits were the blind fold tennis ( Takashi crashing) grin.. and the lovely bit at the end where Tezuka and Fuji walked off together. WELL DONE!!
OnEcRaZyGaL
2005-10-08 . chapter 1
kawaii!
Tezuka, fuji, eiji... all of them... KAWAII
ok, don't listen to me... i dunno wat i'm saying.
but, review backie.

QIngy~
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