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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-04-14 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Flack was comforting Danny after they lost Aiden. |
| Pikaia 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseOhh, man ... long time no story. I love your writing. Thought you ought to know ... |
| Bitten By The Wolf 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abuseGood God, finally a little reaction... at least one that was worth reading, I should say. I was ticked this last week when they didn't even touch on her leaving-- That certainly rubbed me the wrong way. But, your story has eased it a little. I do hope you continue, it'll give me a little something to subside my angstings! *shakes fist at Vanessa Ferlito for leaving* =Happy Writings= -Gray |
| Padfoot4ever 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI love it...and I really like the last line..."No one should be condemned for being human.." It's so true and I so agree wit h it...anyways...Lovely story! Keep up the great work! |
| just a reader 2005-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou have a few stilted phrases that read awkwardly. Next time, try reading your story aloud - you'll catch those phrases most times, and can modify them appropriately. It will also help you catch punctuation errors. |
| Secret4eyes 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseOh my god! I NEED to see that episode (curses to you UK and your idiotic timing schedules! Is this going to continue? Is it? If not, still a great roundoff. I love the phrase: 'No one should be condemned for being human, and thats what angered him the most.' Wow. Very powerful. |
| JenTWCSINYFAN 2005-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell i enjoyed this one too. I hope people will continue writing about Danny and Aiden . Jen |
| AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThanks for writing the DnA scene that we never got. Great job as always, hun. :) |