Ok so what happened here? Chapter Four:

He wouldn’t accept it. He couldn’t. Not while everything was still so up in the air. Why had she been on the train? How had she gotten there? By car? It made sense, he had driven by her apartment and it had been missing. But he had put out an APB on it and so far nothing. It didn’t make sense. That and the fact that

I can't read the rest of the story! :( :(

Wow, great start here and it feels like you've completely got the characters down on this one. I'm off to read the next chapter.

i'm glad she didn't die...

I love the ending! Actually, I love the entire story! You're a great writer, keep up the good work.

Nice Job! I loved it; it was perfect. Thanks for taking the time to actually finish! Write again soon please!

nah killing her would have been... i dunno.. unfulfilling lol

i really like the conclusion!! it leaves a sort of mystery behind!!

That ending was fitting. Good Job with the story... hope to see more stories in the future :)

ERLover1987

Hi!

GREAT fanfic!

I LOVED it and I can't wait to read more of your GREAT work!

I'm very glad you didn't kill her, charatar death fanfics always make me cry lol.

Keep up the GREAT work!

PLEASE, Please, please, please do post more fanfics!

GREAT job!

Good Bye!

Wow...just wow. That was a fantastic story, and it had me on the edge of my seat the whole time! My heart stopped every time I clicked on the list and saw that you had posted a new chapter! It was a great ending, and I am really looking forward to anything that you post in the future! And please, keep posting!

Try something different sometime, besides a W/J one, like a N/J or some other pairing, just for variety. Even if you would never be anything besides a W/J shipper, I'd just love to see how you'd write it. So would the other shippers. It would make a nice change from the obvious W/J monotony, especially if written by a GREAT author like you! Consider it.

GREAT JOB!

Okay-that was a surprise.

I didn't think or want Jordan to die-she didn't
deserve it nor would the story have wanted it.

But Jordan's obsession with Ayres funeral and her
wrestling with whether or not he killed his
daughter-sorry-no sympathy here.

I had hoped there'd be an arm around her shoulder
from Garret/Woody at the end-but it's still good!
Thanks for a very involving fic!

Wow! great ending! Thanks for not killing Jordan, Woody, and Garret! :)

DUDE YOU'RE FREAKING ME OUT! POST ALREADY!

(review for chapter 15, curse the one review per chapter rule...)

omg, plz, plz, plz update soon! i'm gonna pass out as well! gah, i wanna kno what happens! no...must...discover...answer to...cliffie! (hyperventilates) sry, random moment.

OMFG UPDATE! PLEASE! U'RE KILLING ME!

Plese post the next chapter, the suspence is killing me!