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JupiterPrincessCaylee 1/23/06 . chapter 5aw that was so sweet u should do a sequel :D |
Gai-Sol 11/21/05 . chapter 5Hey! I found ya! neeways, the story has some...um...not nice things, and, er, the story-basically the whole plot was nice, except for those chatspeak. Write your next fic. alright? Cheers, Gai-Sol |
Gensomaden-Saiyuki 11/19/05 . chapter 5Nice. |
Gensomaden-Saiyuki 11/19/05 . chapter 4T_T *sniff* so dramatic! And so OOC! Totally cool. |
Gensomaden-Saiyuki 11/19/05 . chapter 3That was surprising. Normally, Sasuke would say "No, I don't want to walk Sakura home." And that's when Naruto volunteers. If Sakura would want to move on, she should have insisted Naruto to take her home. And then, Sasuke would spy on the two. But since this is your story, I won't interrupt. And please avoid using bold letters. Bold letters are used for emphasis. _ Releina Artemis |
Gensomaden-Saiyuki 11/19/05 . chapter 2It's really a good story! But then again, on the first chapter, there's no spacing for Sakura's speech so my eyes got a little dizzy on that part but it's okay! And on this chappies, well, Sasuke is a little OOC. _ But anyway, keep up the good work! |
ShinkuLeFay 11/5/05 . chapter 5Hi Just wanted to tell you than I enjoyed reading your story.. It was awesome... Good work... See ya Sabrina |
Sakura-Girl 2005 10/20/05 . chapter 5That was so cute. I loved your story. I hope to see more from you soon. |
Zhblj 10/9/05 . chapter 5nice story. short, but nice. :) |
flowerangel050 10/8/05 . chapter 5Nice! . I like this story! |