i know you stoped like 4 years ago
and probubly frogot all about it
but i as just looking through the old fanfics
and i really think you should finish it
:)

You've got allison down pt,but your right about Andy. He's a little too nice to allison. Try making him more reluctant to work with allison or just working period. Also maybe get andy to say somethong about him getting good grades affects his wrestling, imply tha thats all he cares about at the moment.
Build some sexual tension, the readers always love that too.
If you want any more help just holler.
IT'S GREAT BY THE WAY!

have i already reviewed this? probably but im to lazy to check so i figured i might as well review again. wow, its late, it really doesnt feel like 30:50 in the morning, but i guess...it it. well, thats enough reviewing for me...um. bye~!@#$%^%^*&()

Very good I loved it and can't wait for more.

Hey! I like it. :D I wouldn't mind seeing what happens next, certainly. Glad to see the other faces pop up too, but I'm a fan of gangs, hehe..

The last time it was updated was a while back, though.. Can I still expect updates?

wow, this story is really different, in a good way. im so curious to see what happens next~! >.

Argh! Her sister died! Yes?
I really like this idea! It' nice to think that they'd have gotten together without the help of being locked in a room for 8 hours!
Flossie

yah ganna continue??

wow! this story is very original and i like it alot! im so used to the exact same "monday after" story its nice to finally hear a original story. i really like the andy/allison pairing alot better than the others too. update soon.

awesome

lol, bender

very cool

now, as a basic principle i dont read AU fics. HOWEVER, i love this chapter so i'll give it a try. ^.^

Once again, a good chapter. Even though you haven't gotten into Andy's head very much, I think your portrayal has been accurate so far. He probably makes fun of her with his friends, but she doesn't really notice that. Andy's a complicated guy. He wants to impress his dad, so he plays the part of the jock, but he's actually pretty reluctant to do what it takes. I think he doesn't really want to hurt anyone's feelings. He just feels stuck in this stereotype that he can't really find his way out of. Remember that Allison has no pity for him.

Pam

P.S., this is March! You haven't updated since November! Get cracking! You can't leave it here! ::covers up her own unfinished story:: C'mon, I don't have all year.

I have to say that I really enjoy your portrayal of Allison. I think you have captured her spirit better than almost anyone I can name. I have a hard time with her.

My only complaint is that I don't think Brian would have his nose buried in a fantasy book while at school (although it is a worthy pursuit, and one in which I frequently participated). I think he'd be studying hard, or trying to buddy up with Stubby, trying to act like one of the guys.

Anyway, another stellar chapter. Chapters like these always get me: nothing really happens, but they are essential to keep the plot going. I'm not very good with those.

Also, may I say that your grammar and spelling are wonderful. It is such a relief to read a story that I'm not mentally correcting the whole time I'm reading it.

Keep it up!
Pam :þ