this was an intresting story. i read it all the way through in one sitting so i was a little disapointed when i realized there was no ending. but oh well thanks for the story.

This epic is wonderful! Just started looking at Firefly fanfic, so I came to this late. Will there be more? At least finishing chapter 9 please? You have a real feel for all the characters, and how they were affected by post-Serenity events. I like Marnie, and would be interested in learnig more about her past. Anyone who can put up with Jayne and his 'premature' issues has to be colorful.

I have really enjoyed your story so far. I must have missed this one when I started reading Firefly fic some months ago.

In any case I basically read it in one sitting so that should say something for the quality of your writing (characters, story, language, humor)

I especially enjoyed “What have we told you? Let the mercenary win!” (I could just see Jayne leaning back in his chair...)

I have enjoyed your story and will continue to read as you update it.

Wow, I read this all in one sitting. You really have a feel for the characters, it was like I was reading what could be happening on screen. Their dialogue, interaction with each other, everything was very believable. Can't wait to read more, and hopefully there's not that much of a gap between updates as I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the whole thing to come together.

Great chapter...can't wait for more.

sweetness

I read the whole thing, it's great so far, and the intro of Book"s brother at the end of the last part was great. I have just discovered this story, and like the fact that you brought Wash back, and in such a unique way too. All though I thought the fact that you had Simon shoot Marnie sort of out of charecter, how ever under those conditions he might have held her at gun point, but he would hopfully have not put River or Kaylee into that kind of situation. Sorry, had to nitpick a little. Other wise I loved the story.

Just stumbled onto your story...WOW...couldn't stop reading.
Great story line and characters...Like the new "Wash is a computer"...great stuff...keep it coming.

i still love how well you capture the characters, i may have said it before, but i'll say it again, this is a gem of a story.

whoa.

Just found the story. It is most excellent. Please continue.

This is wonderful! I just read the whole thing in one sitting. I laughed almost constantly. The writing is excellent and I felt as though I was reading the script for a revival of Firefly (I only wish). You're a brilliant writer who's really gotten in the heads of the crew (you even made Jayne in a sort-of relationship believable), and I can't wait to read more.

Heh. One of the best Firefly fanfics I've read that DON'T involve a crossover. Keep up the good work, and don't worry if you get busy, we'll be here to read when you get the next chapter up.

i like this. you're keeping all the characters in character. i'm gonna go on reading the rest of it. keep up the good work. oh and please have a look at my firefly fic as well. it's called "offworld."

of course it's being read. i was delighted when you posted again, i was just to lazy to reveiw. keep it up, its rare to find a well characterized story with a new character that's not a sue.