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| Zugaikotsu 2007-08-15 ch 9, | abuseOMG CONTINUE IT!! T_T |
| Ashes Kittyhawk 2006-12-22 ch 9, | abuseRawr! Grats on the 99, and please update! |
| Sir Graq 2006-08-28 ch 9, | abuseNice story, keep up the good work. Sorry for the small review but i'm very short of time. Ja |
| Mimiru-Sama 2006-07-27 ch 9, | abuseCongratulations on updating. (I needed to read it again to understand this chapter) Cecil is cute ^^ |
| Grypheon-Kydra 2006-07-18 ch 2, | abuseOMG! I love the story! especially with the humor, a budding romance, conspiracies and Biolabs! Keep updating, and soon! Cheers! |
| Sanosuke.Cigara 2006-07-18 ch 9, | abusewell grats on lvl 99 and the update :P now only to update more often xD wonder how this story ends :) |
| Mikasu 2006-07-16 ch 9, anon. | abuseYAY! F-I-N-A-L-L-Y! An update...~_~ :O I wanna know what happens next! Please update! =D |
| Cezaria 2006-07-14 ch 9, | abuseOMG Kathy turned into a cat D: What evil might she be up to?? I liked the part where Seddy wakes up and Ryx is dressing, it's so overwhelmingly cute X3 MORE FLUFF PLZ MA'AM. I can't wait to see what the biolabs people are capable of doing /gg Riseen needs to see seyren again XD - Sal |
| Anonymoussi 2006-07-14 ch 9, | abuseAwesome! You're back!! Yeah! I think Byran should hook up with Riseen. I'm sorry, just my stupid personal opinion, but they'd be cute. XD Your style has gotten more flowing and prosier. It's very pretty. -smile- Lovely. I had a very good time reading, and laughing out loud and Seda and Ryxam's antics (my mom was giving me weird looks). They're awesome together. If Meri weren't married to Byran, I'd say she and Eremes kick butt together. As a couple. And a fighting pair. Yes. XD |
| Mikasu 2006-05-06 ch 8, anon. | abuseOh nice chappie! Please continue to update! I wanna read more! |
| Sanosuke.Cigara 2006-05-02 ch 8, | abusestory's starting to pick up ^^ hurry up and keep updating |
| callistoNTG 2006-05-02 ch 8, anon. | abusenice update ;D you give yourself too little credit, your writing is excellent. ^^ btw, you mentioned a love triangle in chapter 3. that'd make a nice addition to the story, hehehe...but i won't prod you. i also like your addition of the biolabs and the ghost characters, a nice touch. i look forward to your next update, and i'll probably take the time to log on and not type lazily. cya :) |
| hopelessmine 2006-05-01 ch 8, | abusezomygaah! lieran and kuu!! O.O!! ahsjdla;g! is this a crossover like tsubasa quite? XDD how AWESOME! -prances around- nyahahahaha. i LOVELOVE this chapter because i'm so interested in their parents and stuff and i HEAST flashbacks. X3 yayness! teehee. thankss for updating! XDD gogogo, write!! LOOVE -hopelessmine!! |
| Cezaria 2006-04-30 ch 8, | abuseI AM THE FIRST TO HAVE READ THIS AND REVIEW SO NA NA NA NA NAA NAA to everyone else. What can I say? I found your descriptions of panties to be...seductive yes o.o But want Seda to like... fry some enemies x3 Ryx seems so cute in his younger years too /dreamysigh. Yet what I like about your character is that they're not all like...conventional pretty people, they're all unique. Seda's mommy is so...stern XD Almost reminded me of that old lady prof in harry potter (ok killmenowkthx). But she was otherwise really sexy because I just have a thing for profs. LEIRAN IS SEX AND I DREW HIM HAR. There is nothing stopping me from more bribes to you D: - Sal |
| ThImHu 2006-04-30 ch 7, | abuseThis is absolutely excellent. ^^ I'm enjoying all the situations you put your characters through, and the characters themselves are realistic (my favorite is Fafnyn. >3 he's so cool!). I'll be looking forward to your next update. :3 Keep up the good work! |