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| Black Ice Phoenix Wolf 2006-05-21 ch 1,  | abuseOh no! Kai has to find Tyson soon! Poor Gramps! i loved him! He was so **' funny! |
| CosmicEssence 2006-03-13 ch 4, | abuseThere aren't enough words to describe how much i really really enjoyed this so far - man its got everything and I do mean everything ^_~ The companionship (for lack of a better word) between the Russians is excellent and i like you've kept Tala and Bryan - something about those 2 in a plot with the bladebreakers just so works! Oh and the situation you've put Takao in is brill, that bit where he speaks russian is cool (and in a way the letter and Bryan's confession). Look basically i could go on 4ever about favourite bits blah blah...writing is damn good-straight to the point and v. funny in parts. and well u know when you read sumthing that just gets you going & u get really highstrung about it (in a good way) well thats what im thinking about this fic so... Love the idea continue please? |
| xXxAngel VxXx 2006-01-28 ch 4, | abusei can't ait for your next update! you must make it quick!! ~x~ |
| Triste 2006-01-22 ch 4, | abuseUrk. Took me long enough to get round to reading this story, but I'm very glad that I did. I'll admit that I like it when Kai is the one chasing after Takao rather than the other way around, and you're doing a fantastic job so far with the plot and the writing and the characterisation. It's nice to see Boris/Bryan (whichever you prefer to call him) bringing a bit of comic relief to Kai and Takao's angst, and the idea of him being a total sex fiend cracks me up. On a random note, the idea of Yuriy being a cuddly teddy bear is also very appealing, fufufu. XD Grr on Takao's father, though. Way to go, dude. You've just succeeded in messing up your youngest son for life. Someone give the guy a medal. Still, not to fear. Kai'll get him back for sure! Nothing can stop the power of love, not even evil parents! And on another random note, I also love how you've made Takao more mature in this. It's terrible that he's had to go through so much, but it's very nice to see someone portraying him as having a brain. I think under the naive and carefree attitude, most people tend to forget that Takao is actually pretty smart and observant. He's definitely not stupid, that's for sure, so I'm very pleased to see that you're doing such a good job with his character. I eagerly await your next update! |
| brezzybrez 2006-01-22 ch 4, | abusegreat chappie! update soon. |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2006-01-21 ch 4, | abuseupdate! |
| Firehedgehog 2006-01-21 ch 4, | abusegrins |
| wolf's lament 2006-01-21 ch 4, | abuseI have a feeling it's going to take longer than two days to find Tyson. Please update soon! |
| cherry fantasy 2006-01-21 ch 4, | abuseOh wow, great chappie ! ^^ They're getting closer to Takao ! That's wonderful ! ^-^ I hope they'll find him soon ! Well, wonderful work on this chapter ! Update soon ! ^^ |
| NKingy 2006-01-21 ch 4, | abuseLol! Rei scared Byran lol. Loved the chapter Please update soon! |
| Milla Kuznetsov 2006-01-20 ch 4, | abuseI loved it! ^-^ It was great!! Poor Kai though(sniffles) Erm right. I really like your story and i hope you update soon! Bye!! ^^>>^^>>^^>>Milla Kuznetsov (loved it again!) |
| FirieGurl 2006-01-20 ch 4, | abusethat was good I hope they find takao soon update it soon |
| Sacrifice Of An Angel 2006-01-20 ch 4, | abuseYAY ITS BACK, LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE SOON |
| Ice-wolf-16 2006-01-20 ch 4, | abuseBryan doesn't have very much respect :p nice chappie keep it up |
| Eye-dentity Cry-sis 2006-01-20 ch 4, | abusevery good, i like it! its all right, im just glad that it was a long chapter! update soon, kay? i gtg, alterz! |