Kanius 2006-07-03 . chapter 6Time to add another review to this satisfying story.
I liked how you made TK honorably sacrifice himself for the sake of his loved ones. I think I would have done the same if I had written a story like this.
I think you already know I've had characters in my stories pull off honorable sacrifices.
Anyhow, great story. Going to read "Reasons for Heroes" next.
Take care. |
effect20 2006-01-09 . chapter 6This was a good chapter and anthoner great series.
I knew eventually someone was goning to die off, i never knew who though. I'm currently reading The Reasons for Heroes and i know it will be as good as the others. |
Ficmaster 2005-12-20 . chapter 6 NO! Takeru! Oh well, at least he died a hero's death. Hope he gets avenged. |
Psycho G 2005-12-19 . chapter 6 Noble sacrifices are vey hard for anyone to do and it ALWAYS requires a great length of courage and selflessness.
In many fics, TK is always portrayed as the ideal "perfect" pretty boy with Kari at his side and Davis as the always evil one.
But I like how you recreated TK in this fic and added more to his personality. He sacrifice himself willingly for the better good regardless of fact that Davis didn't want him to and would have done the job himself. TK saw that Davis would be needed for bigger things and couldn't risk him being killed off should something happen.
Some might think of what happened to TK in the chapter is a form of TK bashing; however, someone who selflessly give of themselves for the good and well-being his friends and families is someone to be respected, therefore, this wasn't a form of TK bashing.
I can only wonder what'll happen next now that "Veemon" amd "Gatomon" have been introduced. Will they changed into their other forms like Paidramon, Imperialdramon and Angewomon? Just a thought.
Great inspirations to you and keep the writings alive. |
Gallantmon of the Hazard 2005-12-19 . chapter 6Well, good final chapter to this story and I've got to say that Takeru's death is a noble and brave one, in which he died a hero, which is how a hero should die if they ever do.
One question: How many series stories that you plan for your 'Heroes' series until it ends?
I hope that you are not going to end it with the way that Angel ended, which was too much of a cliffhanger and left plenty up to suggestion.
Anyway, good final chapter and can't wait for the next story! Later and best wishes! |
Psycho G 2005-12-02 . chapter 5 Nice way of introducing Ken into the story. I like the whole twist with the old man and all in regards to the two kids who were to be kidnapped. The story is progressing well and I hope to see more soon.
By the way, I'm not sure if you're aware but FFN staff deleted my Digimon 02: Chances fic again and sad to say I don't have back up chapters for the fic. Those jerks destroyed the way I once looked at this site. I might have decided to forget about this site completely if not for a few good writers like yourself. They deleted my story just because of a few typos. For Christ sakes, I've found fanfics that are worst than my that are still posted on this site and never removed once. Their hypocrisy really sickens my and I'm not sure if I even want to continue writing fics anymore after FFN staff insulted me like this again.
In any case, don't like what FFN did to me be done to you. Great inspirations and never loose your drive for writing good fics. Till next time, see ya later. |
Bluesv20 2005-12-02 . chapter 5SWEETNESS!More soul vamps. |
Ficmaster 2005-12-02 . chapter 5 Aweasome chapter. Nice to see the other Chosen begin to appear. |
Gallantmon of the Hazard 2005-12-02 . chapter 5All, I can say is that's a good chapter and nice work with the 'Daisuke and Ken team up' bit.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter and I will see you later!
Later and best wishes! |
Psycho G 2005-11-17 . chapter 4 Nice twist with this character. No one wants to burden to taking out a close friend who's been turned into a monstrosity, and if anything, many would do whatever they can to either prevent or change what happened at whatever cost. Great inspirations to you and writing the writing high. See ya later. |
Gallantmon of the Hazard 2005-11-17 . chapter 4Well, I've got to admit, pretty interesting.
Interesting, this chapter does have an Angel like tone to it with Hikari turning into a vampire, Daisuke having to kill her, and Daisuke going to some great powers in order to save her. Pretty. . . cool!
If this is the way the story goes, I can't wait for the next chapter! Later! |
Moonlit Opera 2005-11-16 . chapter 4Did you base this chapter on an episode of Angel where Angel was turned human again but had to turn back time to become a vampire again because the world needed him if Buffy was killed? Are any of the other Chosen going to appear soon? Update soon. |
Bluesv20 2005-11-16 . chapter 4Whoa. |
Ficmaster 2005-11-16 . chapter 4 Wow. For a minute there I thought Hikari was gone. Nice job. |
effect20 2005-11-02 . chapter 3Another great chapter.
I wonder will you be bringing travis and Huroko back later. and what was up with hikari, seems like she was jealous. other than that keep up the good work. |