I liked it but it would be better if you put a continuation

have you played the game? i know mai's name there is lady margaret and seto, rosekr-er... something like that... good... i sort of liked it... though i have to admit you're pretty good to be nine. or did you wrote this when you were nine?

very good for a nine year old

good writing but..

what the heck?

THATS the ending?

god..

its supposto be Romace!

dag...