wow! this was really interesting to read. Very original. I also always beleive that Haruka had a thing for Usagi. HAruka's emotion's and personality was brilliantly well captured. Really enjoyed it !

I loved that story. I always thought there was something with Haruka and her Dumpling.

...mmh. Dangerous ground... But you handled it well and with delicacy.

cool story :)

I liked this one also, thought the way you handled this was good, and now that you mention it, she did kind of give vibes to serena, so this fan fic is a very possible story line.. great work

AWWWWWWW! thats so sweet! *sniffs*

"Besides, you're the hottest guy any girl could hope to be!" Usagi continued, then stopped short. "Or something like that." ... That's funnny! Well over all, very cute and sweet fic! Lovely!

very good

that was very well written...

i'm kinda glad that usagi and haruka didn't end up together...whew!

Beautifully written! You've captured a very complicated relationship here. And Haruka just happens to be one of my favorite anime characters and you've done justice to her personality here. Marvelous work.

Gotta love the Haruka Michiru fics. As always, good work. ..

nice story, keep it up.

That was really really good. It was all so... right! Keep up the great work

It was rude what you said about michko-chan's story. It was a joke for crying out loud!

What can I say? Very, very well written, and the characters of Usagi, Haruka and Michiru are nicely captured too. I like it a lot. :)