You just made my week with the joke Gaara made, if not only for the reason GAARA made that joke. Lmao. Your an awesome author, i spent the last 3 days over my computer reading this and your other naruto stories, keep it up, your very good at it :)

this is the last Naruto story left in your arsenal of stories, so, you probably won't get any more reviews from me until you write more. you are a good author. I like how this story is going, very much, actually. it has a good plot, some romance, Lots of action, and enough comedy mixed all up in that to make a very good story. keep up the good work!

love it =]

its not bad, but i take basded on the updatede date that it is abandoned??

iT HAS BEEN YEARS SiNCE YOU UPDATED! i WiLL STiLL CHECK BACK FOR U TO UPDATE THOUGH. i CHECK BACK EVERY DAY! THiS iS AN AWESOME STORiiE! i LOVE THiS STORY!! U ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOUR!! KEEP UP YOUR TALENTED WORK!

update story plz!

Loving it, loving it, loving it!
Great story :D

this is exceedingly well writen, my only sticking point is that yes a two year age difference is not much, however the male is usualy the older one, and howe many 15 year old girls find 13 year olds attractive? i love how you protray Gaara and his relationship with Naruto.
Thanks for wrriting,
Jay

Geor-sama,

I'm not sure if I mentioned that your story is superb, excellent and far above average, so, I decided to write another review thingie.

I want to say also that I agree with Numba1 (regarding chapter 6) that:

1) You should not feel self-concious about transitional chapters. Personally, when I was forced to write a story for my English class, my transitional chapters/paragraphs were the most awkward. At least in my mind.

2)Gaara is the bomb when he tells jokes (or does Desert Funerals or Desert Burials).

I reiterate my plea of several minutes (LOL!!) ago: Please update. Thank you!

Respectfully yours,
//XeroRami

PS Wanderer3 is quite humorous too bad he doesn't write Naruto fanfic. Numba1 is "spot on" in his reviews. Very articulate and descriptive.

Geor-sama,

I like this story, where did it go? or rather why did it stop?
Please continue the story of Gaara's humanization and the soppy, manga drama between Te-Chan and Whisker-Boy. Well, maybe a little soppy, but very cute.

The interaction between Gaara's and Naruto's Bijuu is an interesting side note. I wonder what would happen if several or all of the Jinchuuriki were to be near each other, and some accessed their Bijuu's power. Would the number of tails decide? Would they go berserk and fight?

Sakura-chan is wavering! Where is she headed?! Temari is head-over-heels, Kankuro is just nasty, poor Shika (maybe next time), Kiba is crude, Kakashi and Anko?? hmm... Baki, yea, tough character, Sougetsu is [yours], Shino is Shino, I'm surprised he didn't try to tell someone though. Whom am i forgetting... Ah yes, Naruto! Whisker-Boy (cute!) I like how most authors (yourself included) don't have Naruto be INT 7 (-2) and WIS 8 (-1) or something close to it aka below average. I'm quite relieved that the most recent manga episodes have him thinking at the level he should be, or thereabouts.

I will now stop ranting! But please don't forget the brothers (of sand and leaf)! And don't worry about long AN's unless the website is anti.

Respectfully,
//XeroRami

Woah, now that's a great chapter. I especially like how the emotions of each character are expressed--Gaara and Naruto's feelings are spot on. And Naruto's interaction with Tsunade is interesting as well--I love how one second she can be offering Naruto wisdom and next she can ask him to do something so silly as a prank. ;)

I'm looking forward to how the rest of this will develop.

don't see Temari/Naruto fics much, even less believable well written ones. Good job!

Great Chapter

Great Chapter

Great Chapter