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| ClarinetWrathArineko 2006-04-10 ch 3, | abusenow I'm not too lazy to log in, so here's what I have to say. it's a good fic so far, but I STILL don't feel sorry for Kane, although I'm probably not supposed to. normally I end up feeling sorry for the tormented villains in the fics. I recommend flashbacks. |
| Tigress 2006-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abusenamaste, wdg lol, i knew youd use some sort of randomness in here...lol. but, uhm... wouldn't it be a little obvious that theyd only get a pokemon like rattata if they tried stealing from a beginner?? guess he really is more brawn then brain. anyways, this is a nice start to the story. im sorry i dont have time to read anymore right now, but ill come back to read. i promise. anyways, keep on writing -:|:-Tigress-:|:- P.S.--i hope you havent forgotten my name at fictionpress... and i hope cringle didnt, either... |
| Story Weaver1 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseThis Team Rocket mission was intersting. Pretty good. |