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Reviews For: Before The Fight, Kane's Side

ClarinetWrathArineko
2006-04-10
ch 3,
abusenow I'm not too lazy to log in, so here's what I have to say. it's a good fic so far, but I STILL don't feel sorry for Kane, although I'm probably not supposed to. normally I end up feeling sorry for the tormented villains in the fics. I recommend flashbacks.
Tigress
2006-02-06
ch 1, anon.
abusenamaste, wdg
lol, i knew youd use some sort of randomness in here...lol.

but, uhm... wouldn't it be a little obvious that theyd only get a pokemon like rattata if they tried stealing from a beginner?? guess he really is more brawn then brain.

anyways, this is a nice start to the story. im sorry i dont have time to read anymore right now, but ill come back to read. i promise.

anyways, keep on writing -:|:-Tigress-:|:-

P.S.--i hope you havent forgotten my name at fictionpress... and i hope cringle didnt, either...
Story Weaver1
2005-10-12
ch 1,
abuseThis Team Rocket mission was intersting. Pretty good.
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