This chapter is so much better in terms of run on sentences! I do believe this is the first chapter that I didn't notice a single one as I was reading through. You still have some puncuation mistakes but there seem to be less of those, as well. I can really see improvement here and I appreciate the effort you've made so keep up the good work. Just remember to have two spaces after each paragraph to keep them from clumping.

I like your use of Tarot cards in this, even if they did seem to indicate something bad was going to happen. It was also nice to see that the first person Kagura turned to was Kyou and that he was there for her when she needed someone to talk to. It really shows that he cares enough to listen when she's troubled, a good sign!

Favorite lines:

Tohru spoke sincerely when there were some more crashing noises. It was obvious to all four of them that Kagura was expressing her love to Kyo again.

Great quote there, it really made me smile at how fitting and true it is. Nice work.

OMG! I love HIM! Your stroy is totally rawwsome! And of course so is HHIM! Hahaha! Update soon!

Shigure's house is going to be pretty crowded, but I bet it'll make for some interesting events. Looking forward to seeing what kind of trouble everyone's going to get into next!

It was nice to have a flashback into a time when Kagura and Verity were together, even if it was sort of a bad with Kagura breaking her leg and all. You had some run-on sentences in this chapter that really should be cut down, but otherwise, a nice job!

Blade and Verity with the bunch in Shigure's house? Things could get very interesting ... Looking forward to Kyou and Kagura's appearence; keep up the good work!

Even though Kagura only appeared through the phone conversation, that moment was so great. Her wanting to talk and talk about Kyou and Verity tuning her out; a very sisterly reaction. This is an interesting start; keep up the good work.