 StarrGazer 2005-10-11 . chapter 1Great job!
Perhaps you could write an internal monologue for Sam as she is stirring - feeling what it's like to be held in his arms...
Dunno - just a thought :)
Cheers! |
 JaneRain13 2005-10-10 . chapter 1 Aww...that was so cute, sweet, sad. |
 Natters 2005-10-10 . chapter 1I mean, you have this great little butt and...nevermind that now. Where was I? Uh, right. Difficult. - love it! so jack! |
 sandwiches 2005-10-10 . chapter 1A very well written internal monologue. Very enjoyable! |
 SG-Fan 2005-10-09 . chapter 1Great job... ah, if only. |