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Reviews for: While You Were Sleeping
StarrGazer
2005-10-11 . chapter 1
Great job!

Perhaps you could write an internal monologue for Sam as she is stirring - feeling what it's like to be held in his arms...

Dunno - just a thought :)

Cheers!
JaneRain13
2005-10-10 . chapter 1
Aww...that was so cute, sweet, sad.
Natters
2005-10-10 . chapter 1
I mean, you have this great little butt and...nevermind that now. Where was I? Uh, right. Difficult. - love it! so jack!
sandwiches
2005-10-10 . chapter 1
A very well written internal monologue. Very enjoyable!
SG-Fan
2005-10-09 . chapter 1
Great job... ah, if only.
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