A great story. Very good.

A very nice story, it becames one of my favorties. I like the idea that Tom takes care for Naomi, seems that he learns some improtant things about cildren and the differences betweeb good and bad babysitters.

awww... you're right paris makes a cute dad

I enjoyed this story. It reminded me of when Tom, Seven and Naomi were on a schuttle and Tom let her "fly " the ship over Seven's objections. And I loved it when he told Seven he would take Naomi and explain to her mom why they were back late.

excellent

That was a WONDERFUL story. It was almost like reading a real Voyager script. Please, write more stories like this.

Wow that was great read! A good illustration of what it takes to balance work and family committments. I also enjoyed your characteristions, especially of Tom Paris and Samantha Wildman. If I were you I would take the time to correct the spelling errors, to improve readability. Excellent story anyway!

I think that was a great way of making Tom seem more like a father figure! I really liked it and how everyone respected him more for it !

You might want to have a couple people proof read your stuff in the furture. There were a LOT of mistakes, this made it hard to read. It also got a little long. Fix "Maquis" it is a rebel group, not a font.

That was a wonderful fan fic. I love ones with chemestry between Tom and B'Elanna. And stuff with Tom's paternal instincts kicking in are the best! Keep on writing!

That was really sweet.

Oh, I lvoed it! That's so true to Tom!

It's nice seeing Tom in the role of surrogate parent :) Nicely written!

Ohh another great Naomi and Uncle Tommy fic, this was so cute!! Tom will make a great father someday he has the patients and the understanding to be one. Great way of showing the daily struggles of a real single parent, from home, work, and fun time for all. Keep it up!!

This was a lot of fun to read. Thank you for sharing.