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| bounded_wings 2006-04-15 ch 2, anon. | abuseYay! XD A new SanzoxHakkai fic! I've been waiting. 0_0 I think you did a good job on this chapter, but Sanzo's a little bit, JUST a little bit out of character. I think it needs more angst. The more angst, the better! ^^ Well for me, that is. ^_^ But you're doing well, so keep it up! ^^ |
| hunter 2005-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseAt last another dose of SanzoxHakkai! And a good one at that. Very well done and I will look forward to the continuation. Keep writing! ;-) |
| Althea17 2005-10-11 ch 1,  | abuseI'm glad there's going to be a continuation for this! Don't get me wrong. If this would have been a one-shot I would have been content. But I know there's potential to make it longer and better. Can't wait to read the next one. [PS] This is probably the best fanfic I've read in the past two months. So keep up the good work!! |