You captured Jackrum's character and speech pattern perfectly. I very much enjoyed this little fic.

i found the story very enjoyable, keep up the good work

I've spent the last half an hour shifting through your MR fan and no matter how much I love your Mal/Polly ones, this has got to be my favourite fic. It just... works. It's wonderful, amazing, in character. The end scene with Ted is great. And the scene with Jackrum's death...

I love this.

Sad indeed. Wonderfully written on your part.

Very good, very good. Nice touches with the wheelchair, Jackrum as sharp as ever, but that hint of tragedy that does it all proud.

Very good.

That was good. I've only just found the Discworld section would you believe and I read your story first cos i love Monstrous Regiment. In fact I think I'm gonna go read it now! Great story.

"the priest - a black-clad Omnian"

Um ... anybody we know, I wonder?

Oh, this is SAD.

Jackrum dead is unimaginable, but I shan't hate you for putting the images in my head, because by all accounts they were very good, though heart-rending.

Glad to see you are writing longer pieces - more good stuff to read!

Ah. I feel all teary-eyed now. Very well done.