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Mrs. Touchstone
2007-02-21
ch 1,
abusehehe, silly boy. Greg is a cutie, but id have to go with Grissom. the only thing i want to know is did sara know what was happening or was she also set up?? Great one shot though, very suggestive
Megara1
2006-01-02
ch 1,
abuseHi !!
For your first GSR story it was a great job !!
Loved Grissom's jealousy and Sara's beautiful end !!
Last quote was perfect and fitted so well for your story !!
Great job
Megara1
LapsusStili
2005-10-21
ch 1,
abuseNice fic! I like that you tied her dress back to him sending her that plant so long ago...

Cheers!
aruora.grissom
2005-10-09
ch 1,
abuseif only that did happen and hells bells that it is a challenge fic and not a usual fic were there would be more chapters to come.
(feel depressed now)well it was a great story.
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