Very nice

CUTE! This is the first decient "storm" story I've read in a while!!

Nice chapter. I'll be looking forward to more soon I hope.

Aww, that's so sweet! I love Teyla-John pairing..

But is this story finished already or is there more to come?

Short but so sweet...love it!

This was a great little story. Too bad it wasn't longer. Anyways hope to see more stories for you.

~Tabby Lynn~

Aw... Gooey sweet goodness! I loved it ! It was adorable! And well written! The only problem was that it was so short! Bless! Thanks for this lovely bit of writing!

Great!..Great!..Great!...Will you be writting more?...I think you should...did i say GREAT?!..lol

It was too short but touching all the same.

Donna Lynn

Short, sweet and good. Write more.