Reviews for They Try to Mess It Up!

Reviews For: They Try to Mess It Up!

midnightcherryblossom 2005-11-24 ch 14,	abuse…since I didn’t get to review ch 13…I’ll review them both here. Hahahaha Loved the whole bake off “Where are my clothes?” made me laugh hardcore Absolutely loved your ending. Poor Kadaj… He didn’t really need to die…he was just like…two years old! Haha. And I love how u make Aeris too sweet to be handled…I hated her too… she was too sweet. Glad you didn’t try to hook her up with Cloud cause then I’d kinda havta destroy you. Loved your competition between dead aeris and tifa… Tifa totally rules and deserves to have Cloud… even if he’s sappy ^.^. Aw, we can all go home together = ultimate sad face. ”QUIT SHOOTING ME IN THE BUTT!” = ultimate happy face Red getting a restraining order on Cait Sith = …hahahahahahahaha Pink devil = hahahahahahahahahahhaha (gasp) ha! Hahahahaha I hate aeris so much…I did a freakin jig of happiness when she died in the game…watched Sephiroth jab the sword through and laughed like a ninny when everyone was so upset. YES ADD MORE CHAPTERS. I hated how Kadaj died too…and Yazoo and Loz. I heart Yazoo he’s my favorite…Kadaj comes in second lol. Write more, it was most enjoyable to read.
midnightcherryblossom 2005-11-20 ch 12,	abuse:claps: almost done! just one last little bit to go! ...aw i'll b sad to see it end. this is such a good story! haha. love the random kitty ^.^ kitties make me smile hardcore. you make kadaj yazoo and loz so adorable i just want to eat them like cake! yeah the sierra talk...lol it was pretty funny. "calm down princess! this is for boys only." "descrimination!" "guys don't get it either..." ahahaha cute...alright keep updating i'll keep with the wonderful reviews ^^
midnightcherryblossom 2005-11-06 ch 10,	abuseaw i heart this fic! i mean i get a little confused at times...but as long as ur paying attention...its funny aw i love how everyone pouts...^.^ keep updating...maybe when fan fic works i'll know what's all goin down
midnightcherryblossom 2005-10-30 ch 8,	abuseAhahaha catches on fire…I think its cause he’s trying to turn into sephiroth…but I really don’t kno (haven’t seen the movie…just read it) And the strawberry soda was a lovely touch I saw a few pictures of kadaj…he does seem to raise his arms above his head a lot…I mean I’d feel kinda dweeby if I kept going “mommy mommy mommy loves me and gave me special powers” and keep bragging about it while throwing my hands in the air lol…ahhahaha Loved the suction cup joke. “this isn’t fair!” cute cutie. Ground wave :question mark: that was also cute. I’ve always wondered where the hell they got their weapons…and bullets…and does the velvet nightmare just keep loading itself…cause yazoo definitely depends on that thing a lot. Totally love how u make the really dramatic part where Vincent is talking…and point out how random it was and how dumb they’d look. Love ur story! Can’t wait til u finish it! The ending will be so funny
midnightcherryblossom 2005-10-30 ch 9,	abuse‘As Cloud's cellphone floats down the lake he gets many calls (Shouldn't it short circuit or explode or something?)’ yes it should have…why it started randomly playing messages…is a mystery. Lol wonder why they removed tifa’s hugemungous … O yea…cause it would b the main theme of the movie! Watching her jiggle as she …moves…or kicks the crap outta loz….maybe she did get a reduction lol. Aw u didn’t like the 83924982348 different versions of bahamut! Hehe…my favorite was actually in final fantasy X…he looked really cool in there…plus his faith was actually a small child…which was very very cool. Way to stick to the game with those two turks…I’m playin FF7 right now…and every freakin time I fight rude and reno…reno’s the first to fly off and leave rude behind lol. Very funny…and very cute From what I hear (since yes I’m stubborn and won’t go out and get the subtitled movie and haven’t seen it) the translation from reno uses yo a lot…I like how u added that in there lol. I’m reading another fiction that does the same thing…she keeps adding in yo…now to me…reno sounds jamacan…but that adds even more humor to it…seeing a red haired (if u look closely he has freckles…so does cloud), rosy cheeked, pale white man acting jamacan. Makes my heart warm from the inside out…hehehe. Favorite part: ‘"Um, yo mama so fat, she sat on a rainbow and Skittles popped out" Rude looks at them. Yazoo gasps and Loz starts to cry. "I've got an idea about this" Reno smirks.’ That has got to b the best ending to a humor I’ve read in a while… Keep up the wonderful work!
midnightcherryblossom 2005-10-29 ch 7,	abuseaw hahaha cute! Loved Loz's ring-tone :victory fanfare: loved how it played in the movie for him...even though tifa totally kicked his ** lol. and i heard the translation for reno always had him saying yo...that would get alittle annoying after a while. and the capital can't be forgotten if everyone knows about it LDD(laugh deep down) great job i absolutely love ur story...keep up the good work!
midnightcherryblossom 2005-10-28 ch 6,	abuseaw rude and reno are so cute when they get their asses kicked by a blonde! loved the wheelchair joke... love how u make fun of the movie! like the Marlene running behind a broken pillar (like that'll protect her) thing. made me laugh hardcore! ahahaha keep writing and i'll keep up the lovely reviews
midnightcherryblossom 2005-10-23 ch 5,	abuseomfg you are so hilarious! i like the whole random cloud personality thing. One minute he's depressed and the next he's a crybaby. Loved how u threw zack in there and started a fight with him lol...keep up the good work
midnightcherryblossom 2005-10-10 ch 3,	abuselove the randomosity ...yay experiment day!
midnightcherryblossom 2005-10-10 ch 1,	abuse... i really love the ending "SCATTER!" ahhahaha...i could just imagine it...the woman would walk back up the stairs with a huge question mark looming over her head...funny fun fun...i'm enjoying the story so far
finalfantasyswordsman77 2005-10-10 ch 3,	abuseHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAAHA!I LOVE THE S.H.M!KEEP WRITING.ITS HILARIOUS! Kanna walks in a throws swords at M M: NOT AGAIN!
raikujin 2005-10-10 ch 3,	abusehaah.. that was hilarious!

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