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Secret-Ghost
2006-07-09 . chapter 2
YAY JxK story LOVE IT! Well weird thing is my name is Hannah so good for me being her sister! Well i love how they met very strange and cute... please write more!

Love
Frizz
BJA Fan
2006-06-06 . chapter 2
Ha, I liked the ending to this chapter. Just Johnny's luck to accidentally lose 500 bucks in the water and destroy a bridge within half an hour, eh? Love this story, can't wait for the next update!
ariel
2006-05-21 . chapter 1
i didnt read it but it sounds gay ta ta for now bye `bye

its gay
Haikari Archersight
2006-04-25 . chapter 2
Wow, I've never seen a Kitty/J13 Piece like this before. It's great! Hope to see an update soon.
katiesparks
2006-04-12 . chapter 2
Do you relize how longit's been since you updated?
Darkling Loki
2006-04-11 . chapter 2
(I'm too lazy to log in, sorry. XD )

This is AWESOME. P: Write MORE.

The only things I'd be vaguely picky about is that in the first chapter, right before the scene cuts off, so does the sentence. Also: A could "b"s instead of "d"s. P: But those are seriously minor.

*stalkstalkstalk*
Deathgirl997
2006-01-07 . chapter 2
great story I like it
L'ange-Sans-Ailes
2005-12-05 . chapter 1
hi i'm new to this site and i just stumbled onto this story i think its well written and would enjoy reading more.
ilikedan
2005-11-27 . chapter 1
YAY! i'm a BIG Kitty and J13 fan their my fav. ghosts! (and characters! besides Danny and jazz and sam and tuck)but i've been thinking of doing a story on them too! but it's gonna be different so don't kill me!...really good story PLEASE update soon!

~ilikedan
fadedphantom
2005-11-07 . chapter 2
aw, that was so cute! and sad *sniff* but really good! great job. :-D
Fey Phantom
2005-10-30 . chapter 2
Gah! Love Johnny! His luck is still the same - ghost or human - heh. ^^ Awesome chapter, love the last line. Kitten's luck has possibly changed - of course, I can't help but think that this story's going to have a sad ending since they are dead in the show. :( Oh well, that doesn't mean it will be any less of an exciting read. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update again soon!

~Fey
Fey Phantom
2005-10-30 . chapter 1
Hey! It's BLFBH! I loved your HA stories (though I'm not sure if I reviewed them... I had a tendency not to review back then ^^;) Anyway, wow, so you're in the DP world too now, huh? heh. This is an awesome idea - showing Kitty's and Johnny's past. I actually figured it out from the summary (for once ^^;) Well one to the next chappie...

~Fey
LonelyKrikkit
2005-10-16 . chapter 2
This is as of yet one of the best online stories I have ever read. Somehow you always keep me wanting more Kismet. I am quite impressed with your writing style and I like how you deciced to bring the reader to know a little more about the characters "Kitten" and "Johnny Thirteen" from "Danny Phantom." I'll keep on reading if you keep up the good work.
JillRG
2005-10-15 . chapter 2
Impressive. Getting better and better. Looking forward to more. Congratulations on your talent.
proud shipper
2005-10-15 . chapter 2
Awesome update. Like I've probably said before, I love the way you write. Good job.
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