 Luiz4200 2009-11-21 . chapter 36Will Spud really kill Jeremiah? Please update. |
 mmmbopjonasgirl 2009-11-20 . chapter 36Oh, wow, this chapter almost had me in tears.
It's so sad! Spud comes back but he has to kill his own son.
But all-in-all great chapter. |
 Metella 2009-11-20 . chapter 36*SPOILER WARNING*
I'm still kind of reeling from the revelation of Jonathan and Arthur. How are you resolving the age difference between them? How can they be brothers?
And darn it all, I've forgotten how much Jake and Trixie know about Spud . . .? What did Johana tell them . . . X| I feel like we don't know a everything about him either . . .
By the way, what does the symbol ::VI:: mean in the chapter names? |
 lollypop 2009-10-07 . chapter 2 I have read up to the third chapter on this(Will start reading that later)and truthfully it is really, really good. I hardly ever read any fanfics and normally I wouldn't have considered reading one about a show I'm not a giant fan of, but truthfully it's given me some insight of what could have happened after those last logos. I can't wait to read the whole thing as it is truly amazing. |
 Crimson-lips46 2009-10-03 . chapter 35Oh wow...I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! YOSH!! I have to wait damn it! UGH! I wish you'd update sooner but I know I'm expecting too much. lol I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter to find out why they need/want to kill Jerry. I don't want Jerry to die too. Aw... I really love him and that would be terrible for Trixie and Jake...and then...well...I'll just be a disappointed reader because nothing made me smile...that will make me gloomy all day...AH...oh well it can't be helped it's your story. I'll always look forward to it. Even if your other story...Tulip in the Sand...ticked me off. The ending I mean...geez she died? I've noticed alot of your stories do that. Which sucks by the way. But hey...you'll always be my fav author! XD Update when you can! |
 mmmbopjonasgirl 2009-09-30 . chapter 35YAY! You updated at the perfect time. Leaving for Georgia tomorrow.
Anyway, AWESOME chapter! :P
I'm SO siked to have Spud back!
If that child is allowed to reach thirteen years of life-” Uh oh! That can NOT be good! :/
You don't have to worry about me picking up everything from the story; I usually don't pay attention to detail.
But sick chapter! Heehee! |
 Luiz4200 2009-09-30 . chapter 35Jake must be so pissed now. He should be since nobody warned him he was bound to kill his cousin/foster son. What's gonna happen if Jerry becomes a thirteen year old? Why keeping the secret from Jake? |
 Hari-chan15 2009-09-30 . chapter 35A story of knights and dragons...tehee. Wow, so Spud (Arthur) and Jonathon are related. I kinda felt similar to Jerry when Jonathon and Spud were just talking so casually about their past- I guess its the I'm-feeling-out-of-the-loop thing :) Anyhoo, awesome chapter! And don't worry, your hints are pretty subtle, so it won't be easy to figure out the ending ;) |
 Crimson-lips46 2009-08-25 . chapter 34OMG, you killed Frankie!! :( I loved her she was so cute! And I have to admit, it did seem abit rushed this chapter. I think her death was too sudden and then quickly explained as though it was a come and go subject. I'm not being rude... I swear. It's just how I felt while reading this chapter is all. XD It was a good chapter, especially in the end because Spud's back!! YES! I was waiting for him. More drama for Jake and Trixie. I feel bad for them, they went through so much already as it is. Now, Spud's back!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, YOSH!! ;P
Update when you can! |
 mmmbopjonasgirl 2009-08-24 . chapter 34OH MY FUCKING GOD!
I've been waiting forever for Spud to come back! *does happy dance*
OH MY GOSH! |
 booklover13920 2009-08-23 . chapter 34SPUD'S BACK! YAY!FINALLY! LOL. |
 Hari-chan15 2009-08-23 . chapter 34OMG! Update! This really did make my day better ^^
Yay! So Jake really did mature since he wants to make amends reasonably. And Frankie really did die :(
So Spud is back, but will he be the same Spud? And how will he react to his news of having a son? Oh, the suspense again! :D Awesome chapter, once again. |
 Celestial Pendent 2009-08-23 . chapter 34Gra! What the heck, but yay spud's back. Please tell us! Such a good chapter, but so confusing! I do like that Sun and Jonathen are together. That makes sense. But "brother"? Do explain in the story, please.
Much Love, Celestial Pendent |
 Luiz4200 2009-08-23 . chapter 34Will Jake have to call Spud Uncle Arthur, Uncle Artie or Uncle Spud? Hehehehehehehehehehe. As for your question, do what makes us know the answer sooner, please. As if Trixie's life weren't complicated enough. Will Jonathan and Susan have a child? I hope so. |
 topdog16 2009-08-18 . chapter 33Mk well I have been MIA for the past few months ::cough:: and the first story i wanted to update myself on was this one. I was so far behind. I'm caught up and now...
WHAT THE HELL! JAKE! WHY! POOR GREGGY!
POOR CHILDREN!
SUFFOCATION?! MURDER OF A SMALL CHILD!
...i've been away far to long. |