You know Doug, I've read this about ten times. Heart wrenching with hope at the end. Very good.

Thanks,

Larry (Sentinel 103)

I am crying really hard. This was really good!

Beautiful( sniff)

Very sad. The last night was especially effective.

Dear Doug this story made me cry it was very good! This is defiantly being added to the c2 please excuse the spelling I am half a sleep while writing this great job two Beast thumbs way ^^.

Beast57

Iam against the Devil GOOD BEAST 7

Good story. How did Kim die? What did she suffer from?

Okay... I officially do not like songfics. I can't relate to the song unless i've heard it and i have never heard any son gin a songfic so it's not the authur

Truly moving, such sadness, such emotion. It must have taken a pretty powerful impact in your life to write this, I would like to not only congradulate you on this heat wrenching tale but to also give my condolences for the loss you must have had in order to write this tale.

-Z19.

the story about kim's death was really sad and not that i like death or anthing but i really like it

that was a sad story but good

WAH!
So sad! Tears gushed from my eyes and filled my room until the water nearly shorted out my pc on my desk!
Don't write sad stories like this! My computer couldn't handle it! I couldn't handle it!
Still, beautifully done and well written!

That's so sad.

*sniffles* That was beautiful. I think yoou characterized Ron really well here. Good job.

Well it certainly wasn't easy to read. I don't like deathfic, but when a person writes as well as you do, I read everything, preferred or not.

good but very very very SAD