|Reviews for No Mouth But Some Serpent's|
| MelodySong231 5/17/13 . chapter 5
I think I may possibly totally understand where this might be heading! ohmygoodness ohmygoodness, ohmygoodness this is insane! I won't say anything in this review incase I spoil it for others but man, what a plot twist this way comes! I am so excited!
| the ravens are speaking again 5/17/13 . chapter 21
Yes! Connor finally got taken down a peg and usually I hate Zacharias you are a literary king. Please tell me that this series isn't the only thing you've ever written. I would read anything you write.
| Harry 5/16/13 . chapter 33
I don't know how to express everything that I feel right now but the least that I could is to praise you on this amazing journey that you have shared with us. Wonderful!
| Guest 5/16/13 . chapter 31
It is overwhelming to see this chapter taking place. I can't imagine a child forced to go through this. I'm so proud of Harry's strength and kindness and his virtue. And, seriously? Shame on you gryffindor.
| Harry 5/16/13 . chapter 30
He shouldn't need to suffer like this. He doesn't deserve any of this enslavement, abuse, and torture.
| Harry 3 5/16/13 . chapter 29
Oh, Harry! I like the way Draco is slowly growing up and maturing. He is not the whinny haughty pure blood descendant anymore (still some what true but that's why we love him). I do like the interaction between Harry and Draco. Right now, Harry is too detached and aloof and Draco is a wonderful element that brings back life into Harry's existence and everyday.
| Harry 5/16/13 . chapter 28
Oh, no! The plot thickens! And the twists and turns of various schemes and minds coming together! Awesome and frightening!
Please don't hurt Harry further.
| Harry3 5/16/13 . chapter 27
The entire Potter family sickens me, sans Harry, of course. What they are doing to Harry is inexcusable. They are doing a witch hunt to their own child. And the reason behind it is even more ridiculous. Oh, so, James was desperately afraid of his own shortcomings? Great! What the hell dies James's failures have to do with Harry's future outcome? Does he even hear himself? James is 'convinced' because that's the easier thing to do. He js a coward. He can't desl with thr mental strain of doubting his own wife and actually fighting for his own son's future. This cop out is just disgusting. Sylarana should have bitten them, ALL of them!
Well I just raged. Thank you for your story. I'm immensely enthralled by it.
| greenisacolorto 5/16/13 . chapter 27
I swear to god, I think Connor inherited his ability to do compulsion magic from Lily, the way she's making everyone believe what she's doing is for the best. For Connor's sake. etc. Especially because of how Harry's headache began to go away when she had him do that weird vow reciting thing...
Plus, now whenever I read anyone who isn't Harry speak about how it's his duty to allow Connor to succeed, I hear creepy music in my head. And whenever Harry talks about it, I just imagine him saying it in a completely calm, near-robotic voice. All innocent, yet drilled into his very being.
This story makes me sad, and I really, really, REALLY hope it has a happy ending for Harry, since those ones are my favorites.
And, since I'm writing a review now, let me just say (because I'm not sure when I'll have the will to post a review again) that I really enjoy this plot, your writing style, your characterization, and that I'm astonished yet pleased that you have managed to have a full and complete story dictating the course of each of Harry's seven years at Hogwarts. I have seen many authors try to take on such a challenge and promptly give up somewhere between the end of the first year and the middle of third year.
So, yeah. Very original, hoping for the most beautiful of love-love relationships to bloom between Harry and Draco eventually (at which point I will fangirl like no other), aaaand a happy ending. At the end of the seventh installment you have, at the very least. Since my reader-senses are tingling in a most distressing manner that hints at some not-so-happy times in Harry's future. A lot of them.
TTFN, ta-ta for now 3
| the ravens are speaking again 5/16/13 . chapter 4
I hate sirius already and I'm starting to hate snape
| Harry 5/15/13 . chapter 22
I adore this chapter! It's so nice to see Harry feeling happiness and contentment, even if it is infinitely sad to see the reason for his merriment. I just cannot imagine what Lily and the headmaster had in their mind when they decided to corrupt a mind of a mere baby and force a farce 'destiny' on Harry!
| Harry 5/15/13 . chapter 20
I am thoroughly enjoying these chapters. I see that there are changes in the mentality and the perception of what's right for Connor in Harry's eyes, and I am grateful for that. It has been long time coming. Connor has been shielded too much in his life and he doesn't know how to deal with his probably first confrontation. As much as I complain about Connor, I don't despise him. Connor is still barely a teenager and the way he was brought up, really, does not allow him to grow any emotional depth and I feel pity for that.
Great storytelling. I love, love your attention to emotional details and not rushing through character growth.
| Harry 5/15/13 . chapter 18
Very fast paced chapter! I couldn't put the story down.
| Harry 5/15/13 . chapter 16
Im really liking this Harry! I'm glad that at least some reasonable people are recognizing what kind of a prat Connor is being, too.
| Harry 5/15/13 . chapter 15
This chapter was delightful because I was finally able to have a glimps of what Harry could have been without any constraints.