Reviews for No Mouth But Some Serpent's

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Norri 2008-09-25 ch 25,	abuseConner is such a prat~ and I really dislike the self-denying Harry Potter. I didn't finish reading yet but I could not suppress the urge to let some other people know how I feel about them. It is a great story, it really is. Well-developed and everything but god do I hate some of the characters. I wonder when will Harry's box break loose...seriously he have been brain-washed, he act like a bloody saint! Draco is so cute in here, but Harry just irriates me with his denial of the very thing that make him human. I hate Conner though, I know he is just too much of a child but he have some serious issues. Really, really dislike him, is there going to be any humiliation for him in the future? I am just going to keep on reading now that I got my emotion out of my way...Good job by the way ^_^ To persistantly write a story is so hard~ especially a well-developed one... >_
Twinfetish 2008-09-20 ch 26,	abuseOMG! they are forcing Harry into the role of the prophecy aren't they? Making him be huis guardian! Those bastards!
Twinfetish 2008-09-20 ch 20,	abuseI think one of the main reason why I love your series is the fact that your hufflepuffs are not simpering, pathetic fools. They have a backbone, and I believe that that is how they really are. There is no way that all hufflepuffs are like stupid or dumb. The don't only have loyalty! Looking forward to reading your next chapter.
fallingInto-time 2008-08-31 ch 32,	abuseyou are brilliant my whole mind is thrumming, it is Spectacular not only do you know your characters inside and out and you have the most complicated and well-thought out plot that I have ever seen in a fanfiction let alone any BOOKS of this day, but you're writing style is impeccable, every single one of your words is the perfect one, their POWER sends me reeling everytime. Your writing is so dramatic and tense. I am awe-struck
Rock'n'Slash 2008-08-23 ch 1,	abuseI LOVE YOUR STORIES! LOVE THEM! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
avid reader 2008-08-20 ch 30, anon.	abuseIt's really amazing how you can put emotions into words...
avid reader 2008-08-19 ch 10, anon.	abusestupid Connor!
Ravus7 2008-08-14 ch 33,	abuseI really liked your story!
Jaiden Moon 2008-08-05 ch 20, anon.	abuseHUFFLEPUFF POWER!! I usually don't review in the middle of a story, but this chapter moved me to. The Hufflepuffs never got enough credit in the canon, and this was an awesome tribute to their characters. Zacharias is awesome. Throughout that entire scene, I was like "Take that Connor!" Very satisfying.
Shandi Luaine 2008-08-03 ch 26,	abusewhat a ** mother Lily is! I think the locusta is right, his mother is a snake. I hope he won't drop his friendship with draco. love your fanfiction, it's great and awesome. thanks
Depper92 2008-07-30 ch 33,	abusein chap 29: “You are going to lose, Harry Potter,” it reminds me of voldie's words in the 5th movie, "You're a fool, Harry Potter... and you will lose everything." you must be a psychic!
raining tears 2008-07-20 ch 33,	abusei basically love this series... just some thoughts: i hate dumbledore. Absolutely hate him. I want to deck him.. I hate the Potter family save Harry obviously: they are annoying prats and i hope Harry punches them in the face during the next installment. great writing. cant wait to read more
raining tears 2008-07-20 ch 14,	abusefirst i am loving this series so far... absolutely awesome second.. its not a plot hole... other characters are just stupid.. but if connor were the boy who lived because he loves the entire wizarding world.. then how can he treat harry the way he does... if people were smart they would realize... but if they realized then the story wouldnt be happening.. which would suck.. anyways.. great job!!
Shimo Ino 2008-06-29 ch 33,	abuseWow... That was some story! I'm so glad that Harry is fighting back though! The people around him are so sick! Love your stories!
magalina 2008-06-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is so frustrating! I absolutely LOVE it, but still... I almost cried when Sylarana died -_- Ah, I want to start book three right now! >.

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