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| Kat Doll 2005-10-15 ch 3,  | abuseI really liked this chapter. Please keep writing! |
| fluffymello 2005-10-15 ch 3, | abusewow that was deep. kol. update soon |
| idontknowanything 2005-10-14 ch 3, anon. | abuse"Environmental Crusader Emma Nelson had vanished a long time ago. The trees were going to die, just like everything else; there was no point in trying to delay the inevitable." -- This was the best line to describe what Emma's perspective on things. She has sort of forgotten about the Environmental Crusader thing, in season 4. This chapter was a little short -- but it's very well written and it does move the story forward. Emma and Manny drama -- always good. I think your dialog is realistic to the characters, and I love how you are writing Emma. Great work (again, I'm too lazy to sign in!) Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| KhLeOrOxMySoX 2005-10-14 ch 3, | abusei think that this story is GREAT! update soon. |
| snoozin81 2005-10-14 ch 2, | abuseI really like this second part. I love the line about superman and his kryptonite. Can't wait to read more. |
| Kat Doll 2005-10-14 ch 2, | abuseMiriam and Shane are together? I've seen them in pictures real close but I never knew they were together. This fan fiction is amazing, I'm a huge fan of Spinner/Emma. I even wrote a few on Please keep writing! |
| fluffymello 2005-10-13 ch 2, | abusebrillanto! loved. it. hm so does emma liek jay anymore. or just spin? |
| idontknowanything 2005-10-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseI'm too lazy to sign in tonight -- I just wanted to tell you that this chapter is excellent. I always think that Spinner is a little more observant than we think sometimes, and I loved his observations of what was going on with Jay. I think this story is interesting, and I can't wait to see more. Spinner/Emma/Jay -- certainly an interesting triangle going on there. |
| fluffymello 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abusethat was s0o good! n true they do look veyr cute together! updat esoon |
| idontknowanything 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. Great story. I like it as a chapter start to something bigger -- but I also feel that it would be good as a one-shot, too. I like the angle you took with this story -- very, very original. I'll be looking to see if you decide to continue, or if you let it as a one-shot. |
| megs232 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseGod, this best not be a one shot. I love it. |
| NotBreathing 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI hope you write more but if not thats okay. It's really good, and if you do write more I will definitly read it. |