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smithcrafter
2008-07-18 . chapter 1
Wow! I do believe this story's going to have a lot more "meat" than I was expecting from the summary. Excellent beginning.
Lucretia Skelington
2007-07-15 . chapter 9
Oh! That was lovely!

Now, repeat after me: more Hammond, more Hammond, more...

(-:
Lucretia Skelington
2007-07-14 . chapter 2
I'm really enjoying this. I like the different take on Hammond's view and relationship with SG1.
Obsessed Pam
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
This is such an interestin take on the story as we know it and so well written too.

Pam
taqukaq
2006-10-08 . chapter 2
I LOVE the story! I havn't read a fanfic that has explained the 1969 time travel quite like this :) Elmendorf AFB is a great place to live through. I lived next to it for 10 years growing up. They have the BEST play grounds there. Even if Anchorage does gets a bit of snow now and then ;)
jakefanatic
2006-06-27 . chapter 2
Excellent two chapters so far! Looking forward to reading what happens next! :) So far no bleach required, just bars of soap are need for their language! :P
novastar22
2006-06-18 . chapter 2
OMFG Jack loses the General and Sam ! ;-) ok. really amusing to see how Hammond thinks...
SeedC
2006-05-23 . chapter 9
Excellent writing. :) Thank you.
trtlsoup2001
2006-04-22 . chapter 8
Wonderful chapter. I always get a bit teary when you have George interact with his wife.
SeedC
2006-04-11 . chapter 7
I am sitting on the edge of my seat 8o
trtlsoup2001
2006-03-28 . chapter 7
Yes, George curses a lot! LOL...

Terrific chapter. Glad you got Jacob involved, and that you wrote in that he was already sick.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
Rude's Mom
2006-03-27 . chapter 7
"Plus her warmth was resting delightfully against his middle and he continued to doze, enjoying the burgeoning feeling of warm desire."

You have stock in a mind bleaching company don't you??

Loved the chapter and I'm hoping that General Carter never gets the full report of the other general's adventure.
SeedC
2006-03-16 . chapter 6
This is an excellent story, riveting...
Arathi
2006-03-13 . chapter 6
So when should I start looking for the next part, huh?
Shadowdancer9
2006-03-11 . chapter 6
Wow, you've really thought out a good AU storyline here. This is very good and very realistic change from the canon storyline. I like the "darkness" of the Hammond character. I am very interested to see where you go with this. I hope you can update soon. I am putting you on my alert lists.
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