I like it, please continue! But try to keep Erik in character (angry, hurt, shy up close). You should start out with him being confused

Keep going! Please, please, please keep going! I need to know what happens!

Interesting concept...I like it! I hope it ends up as an Erik/Meg phic though. (:

Oh my gosh hurry up and continue! I hope at the end of the story Erik chooses Meg!

*blinkblink* -I- would like you to continue. Very much so. In fact, I'm practically writhing in anticipation now. Go on, indulge me.

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...I suppose that was enough of a dramatic pause. I mean, the ONE fandom that you write which i love dearly, and you go and end on a cliffhanger. For shame, my dear.

But i really like what you HAVE written. I like that you write from Meg's viewpoint, and that you've kept her pretty much in character. It's so hard to tell with only one chapter, but it seems to be shaping up nicely.

You deserve more than 5 reviews, i can tell you that!

Much love,

Anthonia Rex(also known as Striped Cat, Rex, zookie, [hopefully soon] LoupdeLoup, and also she-with-too-many-names.)

Oh this is wonderful! A triangle but please make it Erik/Meg and update soon!

I think it's definitely a good thing that you want to draw the plot out slowly-things should never happen too quickly. I will start out by saying this: I have always wanted to read a triangle between E, C, and M, but (and here's the part where I spoil everything) only if it ends as E/C. The two are soulmates-Meg could not love Erik like Christine, and Erik could not love Meg the way he does Christine. But a triangle between them (as long as the soulmates reunite in the end) is such a fantastic idea, and I don't think it's been done before. What an excellent plot twist, if Christine discovers that not only is her best friend falling in love with her Angel-but her Angel is in danger of falling in love with her back.

Wow, This sound really good and if you dont mind me putting my say in I think it sould End up as an Erik Meg fic. Christine missed her chance. But keep up the good work!

The EM shipper in me says YEAH!

But the future 10th grade English teacher in me says:

Idea: Good.

Plot: Better.

ErikMeg: BEST.

Random Vocabulary from Unit 5 of your English Book: Bad.

I know what diaphonous means, but it was very out of place. And Meg isn't that stupid-especially movie Meg. She's already heard the phantom's voice, she'd KNOW it was him.

And Erik isn't that dumb either. He'd know it was Meg-he's got catlike senses-and he'd never PUNJAB an innocent and lost young girl. Erik's more of a gentleman than that.

Too much fluff for the first chapter..But funny to read for me! Erik's very...Dracula. "Silken neck?" "Collapsed limply in her captor's arms?" "Dark shadows of the night?" You're really going for the Dracula look.

And EC reversal of theme and author(Leroux's) intended effect. How bought we have Raoul suck it up for once and be the man ALW is always pretending he is? Then he and Christine could be happy and Meg and Erik could be even happier.

Has potential. Revise, reread, write more, and expect reviews! :-)

If Meg auditions for a lead vocal part in the next.."opera"...I'll be mad. Prima Ballerina isn't bad though.