Oh I finally finished reading up to chapter 14! It was great! You must update I love this fic! Why do Tifa and Cloud keep stopping just when things are just about getting there? *Sigh*, anyway, pls UPDATE soon!

Fantastic, intriguing, and a pleasure to read.

Characterisations are well done; subtle and without too much exaggeration. I'm unfamiliar with the D.O.C storyline but I'd imagine that this would fit in perfectly if you continued...

...so please do.

I really liked your story. I'm probably letting my love for FF VII and ur story cloud my judgement but what the hell I LOVE IT! keep writing dammit.

Another wonderful chapter, I loved it!

Indeed!

What has he gotten INTO! ah ah ah ah ah aha ha h, I feel so evil!

. ! I'm sorry to rush you Tallulah-sama, but you don't understand how I truly love your work! So damn talented it almost mast me angry! JUST KIDDING! _;;

When will they do it already? I mean, WOW! lol. They are so cute together too...I love it! I love everything about it! Take care and please listen to this crazy fan of yours and UPDATE!

ja mata!

xX-Hipathya-Xx

i love this story (: most other stories that place cloud & tifa in different worlds are kinda strange to me. but i love how you wrote yours (: keep up the good work

hey i love yah story update it soon..

Gawd! Have I told you how much I love your writing style? You are absolutely talented!

Thanks so much for this update! I can't wait until Cloud does scrape up the nerve to ask Tifa! D

Magnificent chapter! Until next time! Keep Safe!

FINALLY! UPDATE! )

I've been checking this story everyday of the month! LOL! Another GREAT update! Keep up the fantastic work!

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I want to apologize for not reviewing earlier. I have actually been reading this story since about February, but I never got around to reviewing until now. But I really adore this story. I love your writing style, the pace of the story, the humor, and the emotions. It's pretty perfect.

In this last chapter I'm impressed at Cloud's traditional values. There really aren't many stories like that, but it makes him really endearing.

I hope you continue to update this story. And I can't help but wonder if you're ever going to finish At the Beginning. You left it off with the most horrible cliffhanger.

After reading the first paragraph about how much time has passed I was beginning to wonder whether or not Tifa and Cloud were getting it on but apparently not ;]. I hope you update soon! I love this story!

Another chapter I greatly enjoyed.. I can't wait for the next one. I do love how you've written the characters so belivably while still developing their relationship. Brilliant.

omg omg omg! An update! *nearly dies* and such a sweet chapter too! *really dies this time* Cloud is such a dear. The children too. I smell a marriage proposal in the works. But there's also a sense of impending doom... kya can't wait for your next update!

Gah! I swear, this just gets better and better... I melted when I read the end of this chapter. I can't wait for the next one!

aw...sweet cloud. i wonder when he's going to ask her to marry him D