Actually sorry, in that last review i didn't explain myself properly. As a drabble i know that it's meant to be short. Al i meant was that the two characters seem so OCC and different i just can't enjoy it. But hey it's YOUR fic not mine, write what makes you happy.

i didn't like the plot and it was too short and jumpy for you to actually get a feel for eithe rplot or characters. could have been far better and both characters were so far OOC that i couldn't relate. Sorry i found it boring.

that's so sad but true, but what caused her to go ...missing (i don't know if she's dead)? hopeful he moves on soon.

Well, this one's obvious. They're not together. Now, whether she's alive or not... I couldn't tell. So nope, no theories this time around.

Yo! So glad to see you! So, you changed your author name, apparently.

Now, I see several scenarios for this drabble. All different. One... is fear of the unknown. Sort of. This almost sounds like she's leaving the Hyuuga estate... permanently. Except the end. It drives me to a sad conclusion which I'll try to explain.Which would explain why she would be depressed (even though she seems to try to be indifferent).
The tidying of the room looks like she's delaying her departure.
One container for the belongings she would miss? But why miss? From what I understand, she will take it with her.

And last, the sun is Naruto, watching her both from the back of her mind, and from behind her. Like she doesn't want to face him. She's showing her back to him in shame, because she's not brave enough to face him. Which makes me think they're over.
Is it linked with "Gun" and "Infiltrate"? I remember commenting about the Council never authorizing him to marry a Hyuuga... am I close to the answer?

Very interesting. I like this one especially. The comparison of blood and ink was unexpected but not unseeable. I like it, especially considering that in old movies and books, runes and seals are drawn with blood, most often human blood to make them more potent. ^.^ I look forward to more! XD!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

this is interesting, and well-written. Although I'm not a fan of Hanabi pairings, this is good.

Awesome start!! *reads like crazy*

going crazy, eh?

Like a taunt string

taut

Very nice, but it makes my theories as to why he apparently almost did it obsolete. So yeah, I hope you put in a chapter that explains exactly what the guy said, because I'm afraid I don't fully get it. Or maybe I do? Apparently there were 4 enemies, 3 of which delayed Hanabi while Naruto was fighting. so, I'm thinking it was Sasuke and his Hebi platoon. While that doesn't explain how the gun got here, it would explain how one of his opponents could hurt him so much (emotionally speaking) that he would try to kill the one he obviously loves. Sasuke probably told him that whatever he did, the villagers and the Coubcil would always see him as a demon, and that they would deny him any chance to be married in such a powerful clan as the Hyuuga, or something like that, and that Hanabi would be forced into some unwanted marriage, possibly with the "last loyal" Uchiha himself, should he come back to the village.
That's possibly the only kind of thing that would cause Naruto to break his promise to Sakura, and THEN try to kill Hanabi... and possibly try to kill himself afterwards.
But in the end he couldn't do it.

I liked this one. And it shows something more underneath. It shows that where Hinata choose to take a risk (by openly loving her sister), Hanabi did the complete opposite. She decided to oppose her in every way, despite her (very well hidden) feelings for her.
Hanabi faked sleep when Hinata kissed her knuckles because she didn't want her to know. And she never listened to the words because it would hurt more in the end.
Hell, even the gardening shows the paths both of them decided to take. Hinata grows things because of love, Hanabi destroys what she loves (which makes her sad).
Hopefully Naruto can save her from that bloody path? (Pun intended).