leelai 2008-01-06 . chapter 13Very interesting. I like this one especially. The comparison of blood and ink was unexpected but not unseeable. I like it, especially considering that in old movies and books, runes and seals are drawn with blood, most often human blood to make them more potent. ^.^ I look forward to more! XD! |
spedclass 2008-01-06 . chapter 3Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon! |
spedclass 2008-01-06 . chapter 2Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon! |
spedclass 2008-01-06 . chapter 1Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon! |
narutardedbandgeek 2008-01-05 . chapter 2this is interesting, and well-written. Although I'm not a fan of Hanabi pairings, this is good. |
SithMistress 2007-10-25 . chapter 1Awesome start!! *reads like crazy* |
the grey mage 2007-10-18 . chapter 12going crazy, eh? |
Tama Saga 2007-10-12 . chapter 12Like a taunt string
taut |
Vld 2007-10-10 . chapter 12Very nice, but it makes my theories as to why he apparently almost did it obsolete. So yeah, I hope you put in a chapter that explains exactly what the guy said, because I'm afraid I don't fully get it. Or maybe I do? Apparently there were 4 enemies, 3 of which delayed Hanabi while Naruto was fighting. so, I'm thinking it was Sasuke and his Hebi platoon. While that doesn't explain how the gun got here, it would explain how one of his opponents could hurt him so much (emotionally speaking) that he would try to kill the one he obviously loves. Sasuke probably told him that whatever he did, the villagers and the Coubcil would always see him as a demon, and that they would deny him any chance to be married in such a powerful clan as the Hyuuga, or something like that, and that Hanabi would be forced into some unwanted marriage, possibly with the "last loyal" Uchiha himself, should he come back to the village.
That's possibly the only kind of thing that would cause Naruto to break his promise to Sakura, and THEN try to kill Hanabi... and possibly try to kill himself afterwards.
But in the end he couldn't do it. |
Vld 2007-09-27 . chapter 11I liked this one. And it shows something more underneath. It shows that where Hinata choose to take a risk (by openly loving her sister), Hanabi did the complete opposite. She decided to oppose her in every way, despite her (very well hidden) feelings for her.
Hanabi faked sleep when Hinata kissed her knuckles because she didn't want her to know. And she never listened to the words because it would hurt more in the end.
Hell, even the gardening shows the paths both of them decided to take. Hinata grows things because of love, Hanabi destroys what she loves (which makes her sad).
Hopefully Naruto can save her from that bloody path? (Pun intended). |
itsonlyme 2007-09-25 . chapter 11As before, wonderful!
Work is theraputic, but then again, you already know that I knew that. Great job, Lis-love!
Summer |
Tama Saga 2007-08-17 . chapter 10This one made no sense. You can take it in far too many ways... |
LadyMononoke756 2007-08-16 . chapter 3I feel your stories, they're very character and emotion driven. I didn't get some of your smilies in the second story, but i liked it. i don't understand tenten's interjection at the end of this one, not that it takes away from the feel of the story. |
The High Demon Lord 2007-08-15 . chapter 10great drabbles. Are they for some kind of livejournal community?? |
Ero-kun 2007-07-23 . chapter 8Hmm, interesting, really interesting o.o |