I like this story. It gives a glimpse of how strong Harry is after everything that's happened to him. I much prefer this rather than the weepy drunk other people show.

Uh, Malfoy hater much? Your plotline makes no sense. The logical action would have been to assassinate the Minister and everyone on Wizengamut. That would solve the marriage & corruption problem. Instead you have random killings of purebloods who may or may not have been involved, as a thin excuse for killing the Malfoys. Next time try to have a better excuse if you're going to have an unreasonable plot.

So true and I especialy liked that this fic just used good old fashioned corruption and bad laws to push the marriage law through, not some 'magicaly binding contract you don't even have to sign' crap which most authors use so people don't do something just like this, aka fight the law. The ministry Aurors are a joke by design so the various criminals can get away with what ever they want so it's always funny when the same ministry who fought worse then 5 half trained school kids against Death Eaters 'forces' people into a corner and people don't fight back.

A goverment is only as strong as either the people who support it, or the force it can put onto people to make them obey. The Harry Potter world's Ministry of Magic really had neither, no one really liked or trusted the Ministry and their aurors were intentionaly kept pathetic so the Death eaters could do what ever they want. It was really dumbledore and years upon years of teaching kids not to fight back, that hurting the bad guys is wrong etc that really kept Fudge in office and such. Not many armed societies would fold so easily to internal attacks, it's like a man owning a gun but not willing to fire it on a burgler raping his wife, torturing his kids etc. Which is exactly what HP world did, every wizard should own a wand and know some lethal magic, not the least of which the killing curse which not even death eaters can block and yet in face of a death eater attack no one would rather go to jail for illegal magic use then watch their family die?

He! Very well done, cheers.

awesome! really loved this...i'm glad you wrote it! :)

Hehehe, how fun. I checked out the sequel story to this one first, and then took a look over here, and I liked this one too. Definitely have some more reading to do. Continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.

Ruthless peopel are always suprised when someone plays by their rules. That is none at all. Love the story and look to more of your writing.

Nice work! Your first person character doesn't have a declared name, age or even gender. But I love 'em! Reckon this is a one-shot, but...

I read this story years ago, read it again, and it still manages to crack me up.

Absolutely fabulous pastiche, really enjoyed it.

This was some what good story, but the summary is really bad. I would use the summary to tell me if the story worth reading and what the pairing going to be. I don't read every fanfiction story for there some are bad and the pairing are really stupid like Draco with Hermione or Ginny, what worse is the gay story's where a guy get pregnant or any gay at all is stupid.

I like this. It's a much more realistic reaction to the marriage law thing. Really, this man (the one telling the story) was right when he said that governments have fallen for less. This is probably the first (and only) marriage law story I like. Really, forcing someone to marry someone that they don't want to is practically slavery, and Harry was right to hire an assassin.

I love this man you have created. he's awesome. really, and the kinda guy i wish was real. *thinks for a bit* can i keep him?

I can...definitely...see this happening. Harry's loaded and he can be dark when he has to. Push him into a corner and you're probably better off offing yourself.

I look forward to more insightful works from you.

ha! A realistic end to the ML proposal.

Well that's kind of interesting, lol. Nice job