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Luna Calamity 2/21/12 . chapter 1
D'awwwwww! X3 This is like the first chapter to a long story's beginning! I love it! It's like, you left it there and we, as the reader, were allowed to finish the story in any way or form we wanted X3

It makes me think of (if this was a show or movie) it would start with Iruka somewhere and him having a flashback. This whole scene happens then pretty music is planning as many, many scenes of their dates, their bad days, good days, fights, make ups, just all pass by and eventually end with something uber romantic (like proposing or something cute like that X3 or something more subtle like just standing somewhere with him; blissful and at peace Squee). Then it comes back to Iruka and Kakashi walks up to him nonchalantly and asks what's on his mind XD XD Lemme stop before I write a fanfic on a review LOL!

ANYWAY! I loved this story :) It's very inspirational and simple; something that's really hard to do

Great job!
TXJ 3/25/09 . chapter 1
cute story.. tactfully done too.
Snowcleo 12/29/07 . chapter 1
I like this a lot! The slower pace of it, the slight formality. It's a nicely done piece. I'd love to see more in the same universe/storyline. Nice job!
cdkobasiuk 8/20/07 . chapter 1
Wow, this was so cool and really, really original. It was like so much happened and nothing happened. Sort of 'life like', ya know?

cdk
Cute and Fluffy 8/8/06 . chapter 1
Very realistic with Iruka not knowing what to say instead of the cheesy "I love you too". Good story.
Prascal 7/30/06 . chapter 1
this is so cute! totaly awsome :D
MeeLee 10/11/05 . chapter 1
Cute. And introspective. And not OOC. Congrats.

-MeeLee
snow887 10/11/05 . chapter 1
that was so cute. i hope you make a sequel ;)
Azamiko 10/10/05 . chapter 1
Aw! That was really sweet! _
TheInflictedFinger 10/10/05 . chapter 1
O_OThis story is brilliant. I love how Kakashi isn't all standoffish, you actually made him seem HUMAN :XD ((In other stories Ive noticed he's mostly potrayed as an untouchable, uber cool figure, its nice to see somethign different for a change))

And hey, I havent read your updates in awhile because of school but Im glad I finally got aroudn to it. Great story! It inspires me greatly! -nice guy pose- I shall await your next story or chapter! I noticed it said end at the end of this. -sweatdrop- what I mean to say s, I hope you do a sequel of some sort, or at least a story similar to this with the whole human-kakashi type theme... -smiles sheepishly- anyways, enough babbling from me, love the story!
Polka dot 10/10/05 . chapter 1
That was way cute and much more realistic than most fics.
pmsydragon 10/10/05 . chapter 1
I love this story. It was extremely well done and paced out smoothly. Their feelings were balanced out quite nicely, and the cute thing about the students in the middle was like an aside that didn't cut into the story. Iruka was stunned by Kakashi's face, but not knocked out. I really like it. Nice!
p-sama7 10/10/05 . chapter 1
This is really good! Please put out another chapter, i really enjoyed this! You are a very good author!
ChibiRisu-chan 10/10/05 . chapter 1
purr! so cute and fragile and kind of stumbling their way through... ::goes to C2ify::
Mistress of Muses 10/10/05 . chapter 1
I liked it. It was actually really cute. _

And well written, and without glaring grammar and spelling errors. Nice fic!
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