   Snowcleo 2007-12-29 . chapter 1I like this a lot! The slower pace of it, the slight formality. It's a nicely done piece. I'd love to see more in the same universe/storyline. Nice job! |
 cdkobasiuk 2007-08-20 . chapter 1Wow, this was so cool and really, really original. It was like so much happened and nothing happened. Sort of 'life like', ya know?
cdk |
| Cute and Fluffy 2006-08-08 . chapter 1 Very realistic with Iruka not knowing what to say instead of the cheesy "I love you too". Good story. |
| Kirrow 2006-07-30 . chapter 1 this is so cute! totaly awsome :D |
| MeeLee 2005-10-11 . chapter 1 Cute. And introspective. And not OOC. Congrats.
-MeeLee |
| snow887 2005-10-11 . chapter 1 that was so cute. i hope you make a sequel ;) |
 Azamiko 2005-10-10 . chapter 1Aw!! That was really sweet! ^_^ |
 TheInflictedFinger 2005-10-10 . chapter 1O_OThis story is brilliant. I love how Kakashi isn't all standoffish, you actually made him seem HUMAN :XD ((In other stories Ive noticed he's mostly potrayed as an untouchable, uber cool figure, its nice to see somethign different for a change))
And hey, I havent read your updates in awhile because of school but Im glad I finally got aroudn to it. Great story! It inspires me greatly! -nice guy pose- I shall await your next story or chapter! I noticed it said end at the end of this. -sweatdrop- what I mean to say s, I hope you do a sequel of some sort, or at least a story similar to this with the whole human-kakashi type theme... -smiles sheepishly- anyways, enough babbling from me, love the story! |
| Polka dot 2005-10-10 . chapter 1 That was way cute and much more realistic than most fics. |
| pmsydragon 2005-10-10 . chapter 1 I love this story. It was extremely well done and paced out smoothly. Their feelings were balanced out quite nicely, and the cute thing about the students in the middle was like an aside that didn't cut into the story. Iruka was stunned by Kakashi's face, but not knocked out. I really like it. Nice! |
| p-sama7 2005-10-10 . chapter 1 This is really good!! Please put out another chapter, i really enjoyed this!! You are a very good author! |
| ChibiRisu-chan 2005-10-10 . chapter 1 purr! so cute and fragile and kind of stumbling their way through... ::goes to C2ify:: |
 Mistress of Muses 2005-10-10 . chapter 1I liked it. It was actually really cute. ^_^
And well written, and without glaring grammar and spelling errors. Nice fic! |
| Zi 2005-10-10 . chapter 1 Oh I can relate to Kakashi. There's someone I should definitely confess to, but I'm not brave enough to... Ah well. Great one-shot. |
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