This was a pretty plain fanfic... I mean, things happen just like they do in HM64, 'cept that Eric got to dance with Karen although he wasn't the King. The grammar was good, but there was nothing exciting happening, but you should keep writing.

I read the previous reviews, and I want to point something out. You CAN dance with the Goddess if you are not the Harvest King, but you have to have the pink heart in the text box; she has to like you a lot. If you have the pink heart, then the guy who is the Harvest King will sometimes ask if you want to dance with her. I know this because I have never been Harvest King in any of my games :( but I have gotten to dance with the Goddess a couple of times. Other than that, it was cute story:).

Sorry, you screwed up. Big time. Only the Harvest King gets to dance with the Goddess of the Flower Festival. I suggest you go back and actually PLAY Harvest Moon before you write anything else.

Kinda short... but good!

What a cute story... by the way, Karen rocks!

...the... There you go.

AWHHHHHH. Oh mike gold! (he's hott)

Do you know that the King gets to dance with the Goddess only?(in HM64)

-I am not sure what game this is

-Eric may be the king and u may have mentioned but I didn't read it

-Good fic

WOW! That's what *I* name my ranch! And that's what *I* name my horse! *Runs around the room screaming "ZELDA ROCKS!"* *Sits back down in chair* HM rocks, too, but I always name my ranch Lon Lon Ranch, and my horse is always Epona! Of coarse, I name Jack Justin after NSYNC, and my chickens are *NSYNC, JC, Justin, Chris, Joey, and Lamce...but...*Shrugs* Ok, well, kewl story!

Short but nice

i thought the guy's name was jack? who's eric?