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| lalalove 2007-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg--my mouth fell open (good thing)--this was really good. and really sad. poor craig. |
| NjasminZ 2006-10-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was...wow...amazing! |
| Holden Hit Hollywood 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseThis hurt. Which was good, and it was very well written. It hurt because my aunt was bipolar, and she killed herself by overdosing on her meds. It's just kind of... ironic, I guess, that I found this. Some part of me thinks that maybe she might've changed her mind, a little too late. But I can't dwell on it, ya know? Anyway, I really liked reading this, as much as it hurt. Good job. |
| ellieincarnate 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abusei liked this alot...it was well written...very clear and concise...uncluttered but bursting with emotion...excellent job |
| one.foot.out.the.door 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseTragic... |
| Ali-Chan1 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseSo sad! Poor Craig. But very, very, well written! Is this a one-shot or are you going to continue with everyone's reactions? |
| idontknowanything 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseSpeechless here... This is so excellent. This is the first story dealing with suicide that I have actually liked. It is wonderful -- you dealt with the feelings and despair so wonderfully. I also like the end of the story -- you didn't romanticize his feelings about his death -- you had him realizing, too late, that death was a choice he couldn't take back. I love this. Again, another excellent one shot. |
| Dibsthe1 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseI've heard that that is what actually happens. People who attempted suicide but who were saved at the last moment later reported their last conscious thought as, NO! I don't want this! Suicide... a permanent solution to a temporary problem. |