What happened to Legolas?

This was very well written. Poor Rúnya!

The only issue is in your summary. I think you wanted to say "lightning" rather than "lightening".

*grins* This story made me smile. I just wanted to drop you a line to let you know that. Also, I believe you might be an American writer, as am I, but the word "bugger" is actually an extremely filthy British cuss word on the order of the F-word. Yep, you know what I mean. :) I just don't think it's appropriate to either the feel of the story, or the rating, and I just hoped that by letting you know, you might feel the need to change it to something a little more friendly. :)

That is very well-written, although I would be careful about using modern English. I don't think Eldarion would say "Hey", for example but his character is very well-written. You write like someone who knows little boys and their ways. Well done.

They got in trouble?*gasp* I don't believe it.lol

Wow, I loved your story! I can see how it got second place in that contest. Great job!

A beautiful fic. I did love how you mentioned that Eldarion would indeed be more elven then adan, since his mother is an elf and his father has a wee bit of elven blood.

Again great fic. I'm glad you posted it here as a whole

This was a very sweet and touching story.You have one or two minor errors and I don't think "Holler" is a word tolkien would have used,but i enjoyed your story. Little Eldarion is lovely ,and I liked the way you depicted all the family relationships.I felt very sad about the poor pony.

Beautifully written. Very emotional!.This reader is at the edge of her seat. The emotions Aragorn is going through is so real (I am a mother of two kiddies and I feel Aragorn's panic!). I love that you described Eldarion as Aragorn's "life". Just Beautiful!!

Cool story! Ow, poor Legolas! I'm sure you won't be surprised to hear me ask why it didn't continue any further, lol! Any chance on adding another chapter with Legolas waking up? lolol ;)

This is a good, old-fashioned action story with plenty of suspence and heroics. Well-told, as usual. I hate that Rúnya had to die, but he ended up saving Legolas, so I can't complain too much. :o)

As you know, this story got one of my votes. Congratulations on second place..

Fantastic fic, thanks so much :D

Aw! I like it! A lot!one question has been on my mind as I read this, do you have horses, or ride? Because if you do not, then you have an extrodinary talent for writing them, which not a lot of people can do unless they have first hand knowledge of them. I love how they have become a part of the story, as intrugal characters as the people themselves. (obviously by my name, I'm more than a little obsessed...) But yea, great job, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Aw! I loved it!

great job, it was so well put together and touching. i love it, greta job/