loved it!!.. :)

cool

I liked it. very well written :)

A) I am SO glad this finally came up for me (thanks for the pm btw :))
and B) I totally agree, this is the perfect chap to leave it on
so damn sweet and light
I was smilin' like an idiot as it finished (and during the lotion bit : P) that I was glad I wasn't reading this in school (I get enough strange looks from how I act while reading the popular fics over at Realm of the Shadow)
loved the fic, glad it didn't go as dark/angsty as it could have

Aww..shal's such a sweetheart! And I loved how you added those flashbacks;) Eager to see where your taking this...Update soon!

glad to see Shal isn't brooding over MX and they're enjoying their, ahem, outings :)
great so far, love how Shal described what she felt for Emma

Aw, that was so cute and I loved the last part where you wrote Shal's feelings for Emma...exactly what I would think it was like:-D

what a sweet chapter...except for the being kicked out of sanctuary but other than that it was awesome :D Update soon!

Wow, that is such a swet chapter.
Please continue to write this :)

aw
Shal is just so sweet!
to give up all she had for Emma and then not blame her for it is awesome :)
great update :)

woowhoo!! finally an update!! man its sad how Adam did that i mean letting em go was sad. neways i think i'm babbling so i'll just say that u rock! and plz update soon! pretty plz with a cheery on top and lots and lots of sprnkles, and hot chocolate syrup *dribble* i guess u get my point so cheerio and merry writing.

oh my god, I am totally loving this fic. I can't wait to see where you're taking it. And also, Adam's an **! But this story's great so far!!

so is this like alt. univ. or what? it kinda sounds like or have a close theme to a "story" of mine called 'the moments that take our breath away' which i dont have posted but i liked ur lil story so far just wondering if were supposed to like ignore everything that happened on the show or what? i usually like things that r "accurate" more but this is sitll nice either way :) also, earlier u said they have been together "over a year" and then another mention about shal keeping her secret "for a year" from her and then u mentioned theyve been togehter "a couple of years" so i'm confused as to how long theyve been an actual couple? i think shal should have mentioned that if shes been able to handle mx while dating em all that time than she should be able to do the same thing if em was living there or at least have the chance to prove she/they can. nice story so far i'm curious to read more...

nice and sweet :)

well theyre both touchy and testy huh must be that time o' the month...ok so since this is before the first ep and all r u gonna compensate for them "meeting" the first time in that episode?