|Reviews for Paradox|
| Shark8 10/17/04 . chapter 1
Yay! Very nicely done. I'm a big fan of time-travel, paradoxes, and alternate universes, and as such I really enjoyed this story. Quite the enjoyable work.
| BaKaBaBi 6/19/04 . chapter 1
Lol! This has such a crazy plot! I wish so much that you would update it...
poor ukyou...crazy incest, that family...
| burgerbecky 4/4/04 . chapter 1
I enjoyed reading this little yarn. You did a great job!
| Kinai 3/4/04 . chapter 1
A very good story. I know that you wrote it a long time ago but if you make a continuation tell me.
| Final-Fan 9/20/03 . chapter 1
By "straight Ranma" I meant not crossover, altaverse, etc.
| Final-Fan 9/20/03 . chapter 1
What a great fic. One of the best time travel stories I've read; possibly THE best one that's straight Ranma.
This is just more proof as to what a great writer Thrytlhind is. Now if only he'd continue some of those other stories...
| dogbertcarroll 9/16/03 . chapter 1
Amazon secret technique on the par with the
crouch of the wild tiger! Look it Jenny Mccarthy!
I changed into a FOX! And the bad part is...THAT
SOUNDS LIKE A COMPLIMENT! *grin*
"Yep, Chaos Rejection," Ryouga nodded. "I knew you were a control freak."
"I remember someone jumping into the shower with me," Ryouga noted,
"Grenade launchers," Ryouga muttered.
I like it. Ryoga and Ukyou are Ranma's parents and Genma
sealed the techniques because he genuinely felt bad for
something he did.
"Wow, all that time and you were trying
to marry your own..." All three of them turned green.
Some really good lines throughout the whole fic and the ending
| a 8/8/03 . chapter 1
I have to say that explain a couple of things like why Cologne would'nt let they girls hwlp Ranma in the training when he lost his strenght. Also explan why Ranma sometimes have fangs. I hope that you do sequl to this one becuase if the frist one was funny can't what for the second.
| dswynne 8/3/03 . chapter 1
Three words: DB's review SUCKS.
MY three words: Good job, guy!
PS. The humor was spot on, the characters were IC, and you most definitely tied up the loose ends (Ukyo and Shampoo as fiancees are taken care of, and Kodachi is STILL not a factor: therefore Akane wins by default...YAY!). I, too, would like a sequel, especially where Ryouga and Ranma's relationship is concerned. It will definitely be a difficult transistion from rivals to father and son. Take care!
| DB 7/4/03 . chapter 1
Sorry. It's not romantic at all. Nor is it funny in the slightest, so it's not humorous. And it's so painfully contrived it can't be taken the least bit seriously either. There's no internal consistancy in the motivations of the characters, nor do they make much sense. It fails to do much except be there.
| Anime Fan 10/24/02 . chapter 1
This sotry is, in one word: weird.
You need to check your grammar, as I found a few mistakes here and there, but nothing that was too bad. The idea for this is strange, but well, it gets the job done.
| Rogue1615 3/19/02 . chapter 1
I can't really say how much i enjoyed that. The humor value alone was the best. I hope you add a better ending or something. Be cool to see how ranma reacts.
| Kawaii-e 1/11/02 . chapter 1
Hey! This Story is really Funny!
But to put it straight:
Ukyo and Ryoga ar the Parents of our Ranma, Kounji Akane, Kasumi and Nabiki
Then there are the three Tendo Sisters.
And the Saotmes haven't got any Children? Right?
Good.. is there some continuation on going? Not... what a pity
Anyway! keep up your work! And update lost of Inconnence! OK?
| Sunhawk1 1/10/02 . chapter 1
| neko-chama 1/10/02 . chapter 1
This is quite the story. I really enjoyed it but one thing puzzles me.
For this time paradox to occur, something has to start it. Ranma was not born to begin with, since the future was not there at first, so it would never have started.
Besides that, I really liked it.