 aislinnrae 2009-03-05 . chapter 1Wonderful. Quite chilling, actually.
I loved the twist. |
 Tachyon X 2008-12-25 . chapter 1Wow that was...so sad but so well written and it actually makes sense. I've never seen any fanfic like this ever; it's so creative and new.
But, hah, it would suck if JKRowling popped up all of a sudden and was like "The wizarding world is just a farce, Harry's a loony, lololol."
xDD |
 Iamme 2008-07-15 . chapter 1 WOW. I really wasn't expecting that. This is a very interesting take on hp. I looked back at it from the beginning once I had read it once and I noticed little clues and small things leading to the ending. I'm very glad I read this. It's written very well. I usually dismiss the short stories because they seldom are written well. It's very hard to write a short, one-piece story and have it have the right amount of build up and/or the right characterization. That's why I usually don't read one-pieces, but I'm very glad that I came across such a well written short story. It is certainly a rare gem among the usual tripe. The mistake mentioned by an earlier reviewer is still there, btw. |
 Snow White Window 2007-08-28 . chapter 1That was stunning, and very sad.. It was incredibly well written and I don't really know what to say other than.. wow. |
 thrnbrooke 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Oh my! That's wild! |
 lainii 2007-05-11 . chapter 1Wow. *opens mouth. closes it* I'm... I don't know. I didn't expect the ending at all. I really liked it. Brilliant work, mate. Really. |
 limonade 2007-01-02 . chapter 1oh, interesting. my head hurts now... i'm off to ponder the beauty of AUs... it's great, i love it. |
 Lady Siren Jade Riddle 2006-12-31 . chapter 1O.o |
 Becca 2006-07-02 . chapter 1 This story is incredibly haunting. It is extremely creative and I commend you for that. It's brilliant really.
I only found one mistake in the piece. You wrote: "Dudley had never shown her, and would she never ask." I believe you meant to say: "...and she would never ask."
Other than that, this piece was amazing. And I urge all who see this review to read it! |
 Yabberli 2005-12-08 . chapter 1Holy Toledo! Gawd that was scary... and very, very, very unexpected. but it's also very good. |
 thrnbrooke 2005-11-08 . chapter 1 Poor Harry! It's all in his mind! |
 evil-mastermind666 2005-11-07 . chapter 1wow. just...wow. that was unexpected. makes you wonder how real anything around you is, you know? it could all be a dream made up while we're sitting in some padded cell somewhere. |
 Gryffindorgrl86 2005-10-17 . chapter 1wow, didnt expect that. That was pretty damned awesome. Good job! |
 vytiri 2005-10-15 . chapter 1 Hmm...Interesting portrayal. Definitely different. I like it. It's not like other AU stories. Love, me. |
 Ruselyn 2005-10-10 . chapter 1Wow! I really didn't expect that and I almost turned away from this story because it seemed like one of those normal little one-shots. But this is great. I mean it does seem like something people would try to do in a HP fandom but this is the first I've seen of its type. Good job. Love it! |