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aislinnrae
2009-03-05 . chapter 1
Wonderful. Quite chilling, actually.

I loved the twist.
Tachyon X
2008-12-25 . chapter 1
Wow that was...so sad but so well written and it actually makes sense. I've never seen any fanfic like this ever; it's so creative and new.
But, hah, it would suck if JKRowling popped up all of a sudden and was like "The wizarding world is just a farce, Harry's a loony, lololol."
xDD
Iamme
2008-07-15 . chapter 1
WOW. I really wasn't expecting that. This is a very interesting take on hp. I looked back at it from the beginning once I had read it once and I noticed little clues and small things leading to the ending. I'm very glad I read this. It's written very well. I usually dismiss the short stories because they seldom are written well. It's very hard to write a short, one-piece story and have it have the right amount of build up and/or the right characterization. That's why I usually don't read one-pieces, but I'm very glad that I came across such a well written short story. It is certainly a rare gem among the usual tripe. The mistake mentioned by an earlier reviewer is still there, btw.
Snow White Window
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
That was stunning, and very sad.. It was incredibly well written and I don't really know what to say other than.. wow.
thrnbrooke
2007-05-21 . chapter 1
Oh my! That's wild!
lainii
2007-05-11 . chapter 1
Wow. *opens mouth. closes it* I'm... I don't know. I didn't expect the ending at all. I really liked it. Brilliant work, mate. Really.
limonade
2007-01-02 . chapter 1
oh, interesting. my head hurts now... i'm off to ponder the beauty of AUs... it's great, i love it.
Lady Siren Jade Riddle
2006-12-31 . chapter 1
O.o
Becca
2006-07-02 . chapter 1
This story is incredibly haunting. It is extremely creative and I commend you for that. It's brilliant really.

I only found one mistake in the piece. You wrote: "Dudley had never shown her, and would she never ask." I believe you meant to say: "...and she would never ask."

Other than that, this piece was amazing. And I urge all who see this review to read it!
Yabberli
2005-12-08 . chapter 1
Holy Toledo! Gawd that was scary... and very, very, very unexpected. but it's also very good.
thrnbrooke
2005-11-08 . chapter 1
Poor Harry! It's all in his mind!
evil-mastermind666
2005-11-07 . chapter 1
wow. just...wow. that was unexpected. makes you wonder how real anything around you is, you know? it could all be a dream made up while we're sitting in some padded cell somewhere.
Gryffindorgrl86
2005-10-17 . chapter 1
wow, didnt expect that. That was pretty damned awesome. Good job!
vytiri
2005-10-15 . chapter 1
Hmm...Interesting portrayal. Definitely different. I like it. It's not like other AU stories. Love, me.
Ruselyn
2005-10-10 . chapter 1
Wow! I really didn't expect that and I almost turned away from this story because it seemed like one of those normal little one-shots. But this is great. I mean it does seem like something people would try to do in a HP fandom but this is the first I've seen of its type. Good job. Love it!
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