poor shu...always getting the weirdo's...and not the good awesome to be around weirdo's the its kinda dangerous to be around kind...that was awesome, please update soon

this is a interesting fic hope ou continue it i really like to see wht will happen next...

this story is so great please update soon i can't wait to see what happens next.

GAH~!

YOU'VE GOT TO CONTINUE THIS~! ONE-SHOT MY BOOTY~! YOU BETTER UPDATE~! DO YOU REALIZE HOW LITTLE TAKI FICS ARE OUT THERE THAT DOESN'T BASH HIM OR STEREOTYPE HIM TO THE DEATH DEGREE~? DO YA~?!

LoLz. Sorry for the bolds, but wow~! I was excited the entire way through and I love this story~! I see that you haven't update it in a while but please please please please update~?

It's so~ great~! Please~! And I'm leaving a review on Tachi-kun's birthday, too~!

Tachi: Give her what she wants so she can shut up.

Grr. Yeah~! What he said~! Gimme~!

this great story pleaz write more soon

I love this please update! *Throws confetti*

this was good! I love it!! Go Yuki, go!! Claim what's yours!! Lol. Sorry, sugar high. Anyways, UPDATE please!

love your story! it's awesome! please update soon!

My friends know me as an critical and negative person, however, I will not yell at you for adding another story to your unbalanced schedule. why? Because this story is great. Or, The Beginning of this stroy is great, because there is going to be a continuation, right? Come on, continue it, NOW! please?...

Hey, I like your new story keep going on it. Plus thanks for reviewing my story. A gravitation and fullmetal alchemist writer it dosen't get cooler then that. Update soon !

When I first saw the title I knew I had to read this and I'm glad I did I absolutely adore how this is playing out.

Can't wait for ur next update.

(^_^)

Cute! Haha, you made Yuki a weirdo...Haha, I can't seem to get that out of my head... Oh no, I'VE BECOME A WEIRDO!

I like the idea behind this story, with Eiri being the one obessed with Shuichi, but Shuichi being very NOT into him, at least for now. It also has Taki/Shuichi *fan girls*

A few things though. You have some lines that need to be reworded as they make no sense, like the following:

"This only drifted me into a deeper thought of the teenager."

"I have no time in wasting my life in such a rundown drugstore."

Also you have some word errors like the following:

"Don’t want to loose another worker.” Loose should be lose.

I'm not flamming you, as you grammer isn't terribly atrocious, but these errors can be distracting.

You also shouldn't put author's notes in the middle of the story. The end or the begining is fine, but not in the actually story as it disrupts the flow for many people.

And don't stop writing just because someone tells you. That's not how you get better. People don't start out perfect writers. It takes a lot of hardwork and practice and even a seasoned author has room to improve.

Overall, I really do hope to see more, as I really do want to see where you're going with this.

I'm always interested in a good 'Shuichi-in-the-middle' fanfiction. Keep up the wonderful work, I'm putting this under my story alert, i want to see updates. ^~^

~Araki

As always you come up with a golden story that seems to catch many reader's eyes.

Anyway great job hope you update soon Oh and I really like the pairings and the fact that yuki fell in love with shuichi first as well as taki.