*pushes tissue aside*

Very nice and smooth. I really liked how it ended, leaving much for the reader to imagine. :)

A really nice piece of writing you have here - some excellent word choices and phrasing. And besides, I love a bit of angst. Are you going to continue this story, or leave it as a oneshot? Either way, well done.

Oh, and by the way - I reckon you just think English idioms are more fun than American ones because they're exotic to you; grass is always greener, and that. That said, I think we do have a much better selection of expletives and insults - yours are just bloody rubbish. ;)

Wow! I'm a Grissom/Sara shipper, but I just had to let you know how beautiful and well-written this fic is. Well done! :-)

Ahh that was so sweet, not sure if its going to be more than one chapter or not either way it was great. Really beautiful. Great job.

Hey! Really great job with this! I'm looking forward to more! There IS more right ;)

Great writing! Keep up the good work!

Jazz

whew! nice! this is beautiful. you are going to continue this right? or is this a one shot. -> either way, im putting you on story alert. just in case. heh.